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Broken_Winged_Angel
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since 2000-04-06
Posts 994
Small Town, Somewhere

0 posted 2000-08-23 02:28 AM


Locked away, deep in my heart
Are the memories of our loves start
Never forgotten, these treasures lie
Staying buried as they make me sigh
Nothings the same now, nor will it change
Living alone, by myself with my pain
Tis the path we have taken
While true love we've forsaken
Better not to shed my tears, so silently I cry
If I cause you more pain, surely I'd die
Forgive my abruptness, my glares, and my hate
They're not aimed at you, but aimed at fate



I awake to a world I don't want. There is no transition for me. I am in heaven. I am in hell.

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Jon Mewett
Senior Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304

1 posted 2000-08-23 07:05 AM


Nicely put BWA ....I sense a feeling of a lamenting soul here..fates a cruel master.

don't look back

Jon

Beth
Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 468
WA, Australia
2 posted 2000-08-23 08:28 AM


~This was truly beautifull..
Sad but promising hope
(if ya know what i mean)
Nice writting~
Beth

Meg
Junior Member
since 2000-05-06
Posts 12
Manila, Philippines
3 posted 2000-08-23 08:10 PM


I know what you mean.  We share the same sentiments... =(
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