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rich-pa
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since 2000-02-07
Posts 317
New Orleans, Louisiana

0 posted 2000-08-22 04:14 PM



hello to those who don't know me and hello to those who have forgotten me.  here's a short one to mark my return:

warmth, pressing firmly against my skin
pushing through the window pane
warmth in the form of sunny rays
heralding the dawn of this new day
activating those rusty gears of the poetic machine
and moving the heart to feel again

see, short and sweet.


"freedom is just another word for nothing left to lose..." -janis joplin

© Copyright 2000 rich cooper - All Rights Reserved
juliet_2u
Senior Member
since 2000-07-23
Posts 1125
North Carolina
1 posted 2000-08-22 06:19 PM


Well I don't know ya. But welcome back Rich!!!! Loved the poem.
Juls

Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648

2 posted 2000-08-22 08:48 PM


Well, how about a hello to those who do know you and do remember you, huh?!   Beautiful little poem! Nice to see you posting again!

Denise

Lakewalker
Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289
On the streets w/ people
3 posted 2000-08-22 11:01 PM


Well this is the first one I've read of yours and I really enjoyed it.  Thanks for sharing and I can't wait to read more  

[This message has been edited by Lakewalker (edited 08-22-2000).]

Irie
Senior Member
since 1999-12-01
Posts 1493
Washington State
4 posted 2000-08-23 12:43 PM


Nice to meet you Rich. I enjoyed your little ditty here.
Welcome back...seems you've already activated those rusty gears!  



~Sheri

Jon Mewett
Senior Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304

5 posted 2000-08-23 07:08 AM


A breath of fresh air....or is that a poetic hurricane a brewing.

Welcome back

Jon

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