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ellie LeJeune
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since 2000-01-10

Posts 4156
King of Prussia, PA USA

0 posted 2000-08-22 06:36 AM

A Butterfly kiss
on the rose petal soft cheek
of a new born babe

Summers haunting melody
that awakens
the butterflies,
calling them to join
the dance
in their silent song
of praise to God.

eL

Dennis L. White
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since 2000-02-17

Posts 1463
Michigan, U.S.A.

1 posted 2000-08-22 06:47 AM

Ellie,
This is so sweet and tender, a precious captured moment!
Dennis :^)

Moonbeams radiate
When the veiling cloud has past
Playful shadows dance

Dennis L. White :^)

Alle'cram
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since 2000-02-28

Posts 1816
Texas

2 posted 2000-08-22 07:50 AM

Dear Ellie,
oohhh, this is soo sweet and gentle.
A perfectly lovely Haiku. Love, Marcy

BSC

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since 2000-02-04

Posts 2919
New York, USA

3 posted 2000-08-22 08:04 AM

Oh what a beautiful image this brought to my mind Ellie. Such a tender little piece, you are a Haiku Queen. Bonnie

kaile

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since 2000-02-06

Posts 5146
singapore

4 posted 2000-08-22 08:43 AM

oops, looks like i better type this fast and get out, for i wont want to spoil this unique tender moment

juliet_2u
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since 2000-07-23

Posts 1125
North Carolina

5 posted 2000-08-22 09:31 AM

Oh Ellie it doesn't get anymore lovely than this. What a beautiful image you have given me.~~~ Sigh ~~~
Juls

Tramp Poet
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since 2000-01-06

Posts 754
Could Be Anywhere...

6 posted 2000-08-22 10:38 AM

this one is delicious!

bleeding...

"Tis ink coming
from his arm,
Captain!"

Lakewalker
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since 2000-08-05

Posts 3289
On the streets w/ people

7 posted 2000-08-22 03:00 PM

These are some beautiful thoughts you've put into my mind with this one

Denise

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since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

8 posted 2000-08-22 09:08 PM

Ahhhh, this is precious, Ellie!

Denise

deleeme
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since 1999-10-09

Posts 1766
NEW ENGLAND, USA

9 posted 2000-08-23 04:42 AM

Airborne masterpiece
So gently it now descends
Perfect soft touch down!

Yes, yes- Beauty in motion- beauty in writing- and I second Bonnie's motion - you Are a Haiku Queen! David

Sudhir Iyer
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since 2000-04-26

Posts 6943
Mumbai, India : now in Belgium

10 posted 2000-08-23 05:57 AM

Lovely!

regards,
sudhir

allan
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since 2000-04-09

Posts 620
On the road

11 posted 2000-08-23 12:31 PM

A beautiful scented haiku.

Like the others said, a lovely image which brings such sweet feelings to mind...

Honeybee
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since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

12 posted 2001-03-15 06:21 PM

Oh Ellie - I love this, I do! So sweet and beautiful!

Take care,
Melissa~

Dopey Dope

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since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

13 posted 2001-03-16 05:55 PM

How beautiful!!

Moon Dust

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since 1999-06-11

Posts 2177
Skelmersdale, UK

14 posted 2001-03-16 08:18 PM

ellie you amaze me every piece you write so beautiful

Don't ever give in, if you do you've lost everything you've ever had and everything you hope to gain, but if you carry on your already winning.

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