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White Knight
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since 2000-03-14
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0 posted 2000-08-21 12:01 PM


My beloved Esmeralda, Sweet,
I stand beside, thy slumber greet,
And bid it leave Thee, now awake,
Now arise and life partake!

I proclaim my love and steadfast vow,
To love Thee beyond the here and now,
My heart, my soul to Thee doth cling,
Forever to Thy presence sing!

For Thou art my love, my one soulmate,
To be together, What joys await,
For our love is so true and pure,
Wilt bless us through each coming year.

Come forth my Beloved into mine arms,
And grace me with Thy tender charms,
For too long Thy lips I've missed,
I awake Thee now with Loves' true kiss.




[This message has been edited by White Knight (edited 08-22-2000).]

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Majestic
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since 2000-01-11
Posts 264
houston, tx.
1 posted 2000-08-21 03:31 PM


If ever a sharp sword thou shalt need
Thou hast but to call in hour of need
Take thee thou rest at lovers side
I'll await thy call for 'honor's ride'

For bones grow weary as cruel eld seeps in
To horse! For love! Another war to win!

"To live is to love; To truly LOVE is to live!" ~kg~



ellie LeJeune
Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156
King of Prussia, PA USA
2 posted 2000-08-21 05:41 PM


Brave Knight, so dear
I pray for thee.
Sweet Esmeralda
waken soon,
and end this Knights
broken heart.
Is there not one
to break this spell?
Merlynne canst thou
use your powers?

Kind regards; Gwynneth

Denise
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since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648

3 posted 2000-08-21 09:01 PM


Sooooo romantically beautiful!

Denise

Merlynne
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since 2000-03-17
Posts 16

4 posted 2000-08-21 10:59 PM


White Knight
thy spell hath ramifications,
within thee realm of truth
she should arise,
yet a broken circle
amid thy quest prevents it.
Twins of a mother,
together as one was thee key
to unlocking her from thy spell
she's heavily under.
Blackthorne knew of this
but led you to believe otherwise,
we need to search a way
to free her from his wrath.
For you White Knight,
I dutily bow in your kind honor
let not sadness reign,
together we shall concur.

White Knight
Member
since 2000-03-14
Posts 92

5 posted 2000-08-24 11:38 AM


Merlynne, I pray Thee,
How can I save She,
A potion, a spell?
Pray, quick do tell!

Her body lies fallow,
Her breathing so shallow,
We must Her revive,
I pray She survive.

Though it be scarey,
Esmeralda, do tarry,
My life, my love,
Sent from above.
  

Alle'cram
Senior Member
since 2000-02-28
Posts 1816
Texas
6 posted 2000-08-24 04:15 PM


~Romantic~  Oh, what a lovely poem. Marcy
Merlynne
Junior Member
since 2000-03-17
Posts 16

7 posted 2000-08-27 10:42 AM


White Knight,
Thou hath found
an unbelievable
revelation,
beknowneth
to only Gwinevere
is thy key
to Esmeralda's fate,
and salvation
for thou infatuation.
Within her castle
in care of servants
lies a very weak
but very alive
Knight Blackthorne.
Thou brother has survived
and needs thee by his side.
The distance be far
and very grueling,
yet he is thy precious key
needed to bring Esmeralda
back to thee.

White Knight
Member
since 2000-03-14
Posts 92

8 posted 2000-08-28 11:41 AM


Forth, Mighty Stallion,
There's no time to waste,
To Guineveres' castle,
A mystery to be chased.

Esmeralda's life,
May hang by a thread,
If we go softly,
She may end up dead.

My brother Blackthorne,
Has miraculously survived,
He knows the only way,
My beloved to revive.

Faster Mighty stallion,
And pray we're not late,
Forbid that we tarry,
And seal Esmeralda's fate!

Moon Dust
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since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177
Skelmersdale, UK
9 posted 2000-08-28 06:45 PM


Great job Merlynne

"Those who will not learn to use this instrument well cannot be saved by an expanded alphabet; they will only afflict us with expanded gibberish"
~

Moon Dust
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since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177
Skelmersdale, UK
10 posted 2000-08-28 06:46 PM


and white knight of course forgot that bit

"Those who will not learn to use this instrument well cannot be saved by an expanded alphabet; they will only afflict us with expanded gibberish"
~

White Knight
Member
since 2000-03-14
Posts 92

11 posted 2000-08-29 02:18 PM


~approaching Lady Guineveres Summer Castle~

Ah, the castle, here at last,
This hard-pressed ride is at end,
Good, the drawbridge is also down,
Cross the moat and now we're in.

M'Lady Guinevere, answer thy door,
My knock echoeth in thy chamber,
Good, the latch has been released,
Tis urgent, that's why I came here!

M'Lady, Esmeraldas dear friend,
Merlynne sent me in earnest need,
To see my once departed brother,
For Esmelaldas life, his counsel heed.

Pray, show me to my brother,
That we may best consider,
Her sure deliverance,
This curse be rid Her!

Darkened Treasures
Junior Member
since 2000-07-19
Posts 18
nj
12 posted 2000-08-29 08:12 PM


I certainly hope she is at home!
I must admit I am awaiting her response, for this tale has me wanting more.

Who would have thought a good little girl like you could destroy my beautiful wickedness.

Broken_Winged_Angel
Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 994
Small Town, Somewhere
13 posted 2000-08-30 07:47 AM


Absoulutely delightful!!! *crosses fingers*  I do hope Gwenivere is home..

With a little piece of tomorrow,
You'll have to kiss yesterday goodbye.
Because today won't last forever,
And the past will only make you cry.

The Peasant Choir
New Member
since 2000-08-30
Posts 3

14 posted 2000-08-30 08:02 PM


We have arrived a tad bit tardy,
For thus we are regeatable sorry,
Troubles dost we have also, us of the wee,
please dont chastise, our lateness to thee.

Many o'day there has been sufferance a'plenty
Since around the last moon, four-and-twenty,
The dear Esmeradla, lay in death's clutch,
Too deep for even the White Knight's touch.

Biwixit and between,
He hath not yet seen,
Thee cure or thee way,
For this let us pray.
Neither smooth nor serenre,
This terrible dream,
Merlynne of ashen grey,
Ne'r lead our hero astray.


kelieth
Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 314
Normal IL - USA
15 posted 2000-08-30 08:28 PM


Great romance and imagery let us pray for our heros fate.  


Kevin

"Anything is possible with patience, time is the tool use it to reach your goals."

The Peasant Choir
New Member
since 2000-08-30
Posts 3

16 posted 2000-08-30 10:37 PM


And thus you now find us at a humble home,
To thy lovely Guinevere, our Knight did roam,
By Merylnne's words in hopes of answer,
Disrupting her from her time with a "lancer".

But understanding is she to his plight,
Her heart tis filled with feelings contrite,
Therefore onto him, she grant any request,
This she avows to upon her family crest.

Guinevere , Lady of Gold,
Please help take a'hold,
The Knight and his Brother,
Intertwined with one another.
Bestowing sylblings behold,
The Magic about to unfold,
Silence all sound ye smother,
Whilst words from Queen Mother.

White Knight
Member
since 2000-03-14
Posts 92

17 posted 2000-09-01 07:17 AM


~White Knight looking around~

What is this sweet sound that I most admire,
Is it the wind or an angel choir,
Light gentle voices wafting on the breeze,
Or zephyr currents whistling thru the trees?

This siren singing in muffled tone,
Gives me the impression, I'm not alone,
Where e'er the source, it resonates true,
A soul bearing utterance, and oh, so blue.

Images are conjured, almost surreal,
Esmeralda floating, Merlynnes' seal,
My brother resurrected, dangling a key,
Queen Mother smiling, but silent is She.

"Biwixit and between", words from the air,
Sweet silent whispers that somebody cares,
Is this a trance or a magical dream?
My mission, my focus Must reign Supreme!


[This message has been edited by White Knight (edited 09-01-2000).]

Lady Guinevere
Junior Member
since 2000-03-12
Posts 21

18 posted 2000-09-03 03:45 PM


Oh what headache !
What's wrong with my head ?
What has happened ?
Am I alive or dead ?

What's that noise
I hear outside ?
Sounds like one's pounding
With all his might !

My goodness, I'm dizzy
I better not fall
And find some strength
With these castle walls

The door, the door ...
I must find my way
To the door ...
Is it night or day ?

I do remember
Nursing someone
My Lancelot dear ?
No...he's been forever gone

Oh, Knight Blackthorne !
Memories come back !
A potion to drug me
I see in a flashback !

What mess ! What stupidity !
I must find a way out of here !
The door...the door, who's at the door ?
A friend, or someone to fear ?

Thank God ! White Knight !
So glad to see you my dear friend !
Here are the keys, please take care of all
As my here adventure comes to an end

Off I must go, onto a search
For Lancelot, still on his quest
To find him I must
No sooner will I rest

Farewell good friend
Take care of things here
And wish me luck
On my search for Lancelot dear...


~ Lady Guinevere ~



White Knight
Member
since 2000-03-14
Posts 92

19 posted 2000-09-05 11:45 AM


~to Lady Guinevere~

M'Lady fair Guinevere,
Must see my Brother, is he near?
You seem to be in quite a state,
Thanks for the keys, don't be late!

How odd for this Lady to act,
Have never seen her look so detached,
And her uncharacteristic demeanor,
Tis the first time I've seen of 'er.

Tis true Lancelots absence is wearing,
On M'Lady so passionately caring,
"Fare thee well M'Lady and Queen"
I must enter and canvas the scene.

~Looking for Knight Blackthorne~

So many doors in this castle to check,
Finding my brother must be done quick,
"Knight Blackthorne, make yourself known,
Tis your brother, I've come all alone."

"Show thyself, here in this place,
Come let us talk, face to face,
I beg thee, for Esmeraldas sake,
Come talk to reverse my heartache!"

Knight Blackthorne
Junior Member
since 2000-06-28
Posts 14

20 posted 2000-09-07 09:19 PM


Bandaged and bruised,
Painfully weak.
I hear a voice
My brother seeks.

For me to help
and assist
his life’s true love
I must move quick.

What happened,
In the battle rage.
My heart opened
when I saw his face.

Love brought fire
to his eyes.
My brother fought
I saved his life.

I learned the force
deep within,
That love is good
For all my friend

Servant lad
talk to me,
this strange place.
where would I be?

Would’st thou be
a kind lad,
Fetch my boots
cloak an hat.

Bring my brother
here to me.
My wounds leave me weak
for all to see.

What’s thy name?
Thou helped me.
Thyne blades quick,
The silver seen.



Silverblade
New Member
since 2000-09-07
Posts 1

21 posted 2000-09-07 09:34 PM


I saw the battle
thy did face.
Thy brothers’ love
upon his face.

Knight’s fought brave
Many died
Thou was left,
A bloody sight.

A healer gave
a gift to me.
It helped thy live
with but a drink

Honored a life
I could save
The barbarians re-group
this very day.

Thus I shall bring
thy brother to thee
To quell the evil
That’s yet to be.

Myne name is simple
named by praise
I’m humbly good
called Silverblade.

Evil works,
a twisted plot
the brother knights
will journey the spot.

____________________

The battle fierce,
Far from won
Read the account,
It’s far from done. (Silverblade’s Account)

_____________________

To White Knight:

Brave bold knight,
Thy brother seeks.
Would thoust kindly
Follow me.


[This message has been edited by Silverblade (edited 09-07-2000).]

White Knight
Member
since 2000-03-14
Posts 92

22 posted 2000-09-09 11:25 AM


Lead on friend,
and tarry not,
To my brothers side,
Time can't be bought!

Excuse my boldness,
I know not thy name,
Yet you look familair,
From whence hast thou came?

How be it He lives,
I saw him pierced through,
He tasted steel in my place,
Yet he lives anew?

He fought so valiant,
His rank need restore,
I'll petition King Arthur,
T'will be his reward!


[This message has been edited by White Knight (edited 09-09-2000).]

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