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juliet_2u Senior Member
since 2000-07-23
Posts 1125North Carolina 
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Sweep me away love Lovers elude till dawn breaks Never looking back |
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Lady Lost Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 470 |
This is beautiful...It flows nicely & is very romatic!....beth You can never have too much fiction; reality can be such a bore |
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juliet_2u Senior Member
since 2000-07-23
Posts 1125North Carolina |
Beth thank you so much. It was written about a very special time. Juls |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
hey juliet, you are one up now... hmmm you are a confirmed addict of haiku/senryu poetry.... ha ha  nice one here... and seems a special moment regards, sudhir |
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Chanson Senior Member
since 2000-08-19
Posts 1559Up Creek w/Out Paddle |
This is a beautiful senryu. Much enjoyed, juliet!  ...chanson~ |
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juliet_2u Senior Member
since 2000-07-23
Posts 1125North Carolina |
Oh Sudhir you know I am sooooo addicted , hehe. You better catch up with me my friend. Great to hear from you as always. Juls |
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juliet_2u Senior Member
since 2000-07-23
Posts 1125North Carolina |
Chanson, thank you so much for the kind words. They mean a lot. Juls |
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Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. |
Juliet, This is so sweet and tender! Dennis :^) Moonbeams radiate When the veiling cloud has past Playful shadows dance Dennis L. White :^) |
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juliet_2u Senior Member
since 2000-07-23
Posts 1125North Carolina |
Dennis , I was feeling pretty tender when I wrote it. Thanks for your nice words. Juls |
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BSC
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since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
Simply beautiful Juls, so soft and romantic. Bonnie |
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juliet_2u Senior Member
since 2000-07-23
Posts 1125North Carolina |
Bonnie thanks so much, you know I love hearing from you. Juls |
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allan Senior Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 620On the road |
You captured this breathtakingly... |
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juliet_2u Senior Member
since 2000-07-23
Posts 1125North Carolina |
Awww Alan thank you so much. Juls |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
This is amazing and beautiful, thank you for sharing it |
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juliet_2u Senior Member
since 2000-07-23
Posts 1125North Carolina |
Lakewalker, you are so kind. Thank you so very much. Juls |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
Positively lovely! ellie Summers haunting melody that awakens the butterflies, calling them to join the dance in their silent song of praise to God. eL |
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juliet_2u Senior Member
since 2000-07-23
Posts 1125North Carolina |
Ellie, like always, you're so sweet. Thanks so much. Juls |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Juliet~ A splendid job ! You're doing very well with the forms. GO GIRL !  ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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juliet_2u Senior Member
since 2000-07-23
Posts 1125North Carolina |
Hey Marge, thanks so much.Bows to her mentor, hehe. Juls |
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INclan Senior Member
since 1999-07-20
Posts 1024Indiana, USA |
This works for me! Name the time and place... (just kidding). Nicely done. |
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Alle'cram Senior Member
since 2000-02-28
Posts 1816Texas |
Juls, Tender times captured! Lovely. A great Haiku. Love, Marcy |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
and another satisified reader types, eager to be added on to the no. of replies Write more haiku, new converted addict  |
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juliet_2u Senior Member
since 2000-07-23
Posts 1125North Carolina |
Well INclan you know that big oak tree? The one by the clear, cool stream we love so much? Right there will do nicely. Hehe. Thanks INclan. Juls |
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juliet_2u Senior Member
since 2000-07-23
Posts 1125North Carolina |
Marcy so sweet as always. Thanks girly. Juls |
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juliet_2u Senior Member
since 2000-07-23
Posts 1125North Carolina |
Kaile, it will be my pleasure to write more. And thanks so much. Juls |
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