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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... 
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this was originally posted as a response to Lakewalker's 'power to do good haiku', but it was suggested to me that I re-post it on it's own. hope you like.  _________________________________ crawl on little friend your life's purpose to fulfull I will not bug you -vlraynes "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet. -vlraynes [This message has been edited by vlraynes (edited 08-21-2000).] |
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pegasus111 Member Elite
since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219ocala, fl, usa |
smiles from me on this one.. try this.. three body parts four wings, six hairy legs be still, my heart the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
you crazy bug lovers...  heeheecute..cant help but take a second look at the bugs now...! ha! but still i stand firm on roaches--those bad bugs die! sorry.. lol, dg "Half of what i say is meaningless; but i say it so that the other half may reach you." -Kahlil Gibran |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Very nice, I like it |
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BSC
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Member Elite
since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
It's not a spider is it????? This is sooo cute, love it. Bonnie |
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Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. |
Vicky, This stands alone very proudly, feel free to take a bow! Dennis :^) Moonbeams radiate When the veiling cloud has past Playful shadows dance Dennis L. White :^) |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Vicky~ Creepy little bug Go ! ... Be on your merry way Run ! RAID man is here ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very cute...and I agree that as long as it isn't a spider, a roach or a bee, it can live...hehehe Denise |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
This so cute and yes it's wonderful enough to stand on it's own, It's own eight little legs, that is! ellie |
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INclan Senior Member
since 1999-07-20
Posts 1024Indiana, USA |
Ahhhh, thank you for posting this in its own right....WELL DONE. INclan |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
apparently, your friend was right..liked the clever way you used the word "bug" in the last line |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Oops!...looks like I'm slackin' on my responses on this one...sorry. pegasus111- thanks so much for your response. glad you like. dg- gotta love those bugs. LOL thanks for the response. Lakewalker- thanks for reading...glad you like. Bonnie- nope...just for you, it's not a spider. LOL thanks so much for the response. Dennis- a huge compliment coming from you... 'haiku king'. thank you so much forthe words of encouragement. glad you enjoyed this. Marge- love your response! LOL thanksfor reading and responding. Denise- thanks for the pro-life vote. LOL bugs everywhere are cheering your name. thanks for the response. ellie- sometimes the little guys need those eight legs just to get away. LOL thanks so much for your positive response. INclan- BIG THANKS TO YOU! really appreciate you suggesting that I post this in it's own thread. It's been fun reading everyone's responses to it. Really glad you enjoyed this. kaile- so glad you liked this. i really appreciate your response. LOVE ALL YOU GUYS!!! -vicky (a.k.a. 'tricks') |
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