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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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Imagine This < !signature-->Moonlight sliver falls Gently across night meadow Illuminating ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com [This message has been edited by Marge Tindal (edited 08-20-2000).] |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
very nice marge! i can imagine it just beautifully  (now i'll go get my eyes chkd after that bright yellow has blinded me! LOL) dg< !signature--> "Half of what i say is meaningless; but i say it so that the other half may reach you." -Kahlil Gibran [This message has been edited by dgvarner (edited 08-20-2000).] |
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pegasus111 Member Elite
since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219ocala, fl, usa |
lovely Marge..my kind of haiku.. the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost |
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Alle'cram Senior Member
since 2000-02-28
Posts 1816Texas |
As I feel the breeze I am reminded of you Across the ocean Good one Marge! |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
moonlight on meadow wildflowers wishing on stars nature's nightlight glows -vlraynes Marge- this is really beautiful. I love the moon and I love this haiku. love ya, vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet. -vlraynes [This message has been edited by vlraynes (edited 08-21-2000).] |
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juliet_2u Senior Member
since 2000-07-23
Posts 1125North Carolina |
Awww Marge, lovely as always. Hugs, Juls |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
DG~ LOL ! You're quick - I changed it as soon as I saw the goldie-yuck that didn't work ! Pegasus~ I'm glad you enjoyed it. Marcy~ What a lovely Senryu you penned in response. Thank you. Vicky~ You just did a lovely one too ! Thank you for sharing. Juliet~ So pleased to share with one who is growing in her poetry !  ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
Mellow light glistens the meadow shimmers and shines a summer mirror great job, Marge, I love it! ellie Summers haunting melody that awakens the butterflies, calling them to join the dance in their silent song of praise to God. eL |
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Lady Lost Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 470 |
Marge..I can imagine this! So enchanting!.....beth You can never have too much fiction; reality can be such a bore |
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BSC
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Member Elite
since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
Simply perfect Marge...What a beautiful night vision you have painted here....Bonnie |
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Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. |
I can imagine Meadow lit by sliver smile Marge as silhouette Beautiful Image Marge! Dennis :^) Moonbeams radiate When the veiling cloud has past Playful shadows dance Dennis L. White :^) |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
This is such a great sight to be imagining Keep up the great haiku! |
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deleeme Senior Member
since 1999-10-09
Posts 1766NEW ENGLAND, USA |
There's just enough light In this verdant paradise To have a deer time! Yes I agree Marge you've painted a very delightful moment & enchanting place. David |
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Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Brilliant! Denise |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Ellie~ What a delightfully Haiku reply ! Wonderful smiles you send my way. LadyLost~ I greatly appreciate your reply. Bonie~ That moon is an amazing inspiration - be it full or in little slivers. Thank you. Dennis~ Awwwwwwwww ! How sweet ! LakeWalker~ Isn't Haiku jsut so much fun ? David~ You did a beautiful job on yours too. I love it when others share. Denise~ I thank you so ! ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
i imagined just as you have asked and wondered how come i never see things that way before wonderful haiku;0) |
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Tramp Poet Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 754Could Be Anywhere... |
hey Marge loved the imagry... are the slivers benign? bleeding... "Tis ink coming from his arm, Captain!" |
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Irie Senior Member
since 1999-12-01
Posts 1493Washington State |
Marge... With 8 little words you've painted an entire canvas here, and beautifuly I might add. The visions that played in my head when I read this unfolded just as smoothly as the moon rises! I love it when someone paints for me....Thanks! ~Sheri |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Kaile~ Ah ... glad to share a new perspective with you. Thank you. Daniel~ Extremely so ! Irie~ I thank you for the joy in your reply. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Chanson Senior Member
since 2000-08-19
Posts 1559Up Creek w/Out Paddle |
Beautiful!!!! ...chanson~ |
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Jon Mewett Senior Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304 |
Moolight becomes you and your words. lovely jon |
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Alle'cram Senior Member
since 2000-02-28
Posts 1816Texas |
Marge, I still see a lake! and a meadow, and all the above. {smile}. Love, Marcy |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
i am the proudest monkey! i am the proudest student! Marge, I just found peace, serenity, tranquillity, ... name it, I found it... better than a photograph or a Rembrandt! regards, sudhir |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
beautiful..yes this was better than a photo ~~softly Maureen |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Chanson~ Thank you so much. Jon~ I greatly appreciate your comment. Marcy~ Ahh ! Thus it is serene. Sudhir~ You're such a sweetie ! Maureen~ CLICK ! Just a photographic memory away ! *Thanks to you all. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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