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vlraynes
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since 2000-07-25
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Somewhere... out there...

0 posted 2000-08-20 01:38 PM



think i was up way too late last night.
see what lack of sleep will do.  
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just sitting and spinning
    spinning a tale
a tale of sitting
    and spinning a tale
         of word and rhyme
rhyme and word
    straight from the heart
a heart so confused...
    a heart just sitting...
          and spinning...

        -vlraynes


"...until you have read the verse on his
heart, you have not truely met the poet.
        -vlraynes

© Copyright 2000 Vicky L. Raynes - All Rights Reserved
dgvarner
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since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552
High Springs, Florida
1 posted 2000-08-20 03:42 PM


heeheehee..oh what a tale you tell when you spin a tale!  
(yeah..those late niters are doozies aye!  ha!)
cute one ..i like!!  

dg


"Half of what i say is meaningless; but i say it so that the other half may reach you."
-Kahlil Gibran


Lakewalker
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since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289
On the streets w/ people
2 posted 2000-08-20 08:15 PM


I liked this too, a very enjoyable read this evening   Thanks for spinning this tale for us!
pegasus111
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since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219
ocala, fl, usa
3 posted 2000-08-21 12:32 PM


did I start a new fad here?  lol  love those late night rambles..eh, dg?..lol

the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost

vlraynes
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since 2000-07-25
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Somewhere... out there...
4 posted 2000-08-21 01:44 AM



dg-
  glad you liked this little tale.
  strange little ditty...but fun to write.  

Lakewalker-
  thanks for reading this latenite lymeric.
  glad you enjoyed.  

pegasus111-
  yep...gotta luv those ramblin' rhymes. LOL
  thanks for reading.    

  thanks everybody!

  love you guys,
        -vicky  ('tricks' to you, dg   )



[This message has been edited by vlraynes (edited 08-21-2000).]

dgvarner
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since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552
High Springs, Florida
5 posted 2000-12-16 01:42 PM


just sittin..not spinnin..wish i was spinnin....OOPS!  that was a tad x-rated..!  

this ones still funny...    

teehee, g

"people who need people are the luckiest people..." barbra s.

kcsgrandma
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since 2000-09-24
Posts 1522
Presque Isle, ME
6 posted 2000-12-16 02:31 PM


I know this feeling.  The brain does some odd things when sleep deprived, eh?  

To love another person is to see the face of God.
- Les Miserables

Marilyn

kaile
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since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146
singapore
7 posted 2000-12-16 07:30 PM


hi, i just met an old friend yesterday and i was so thrilled that i slept at about 4 am today...this poem seems to speak to me today...
ellie LeJeune
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since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156
King of Prussia, PA USA
8 posted 2000-12-16 08:18 PM


the crazies do set in on a sleepless night...oh yea...ellie

Belief is a truth held in the mind; faith is a fire in the heart.

Joseph Fort Newton



midnightblues
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since 2000-07-01
Posts 1597
Singapore
9 posted 2000-12-17 08:28 AM


tricks i really love this, catchy and cool!
juz be sure to keep spinning, i love it sure i do!

very nice, vicky! *huGz*

love, michelle


If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues™

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