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ellie LeJeune
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since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156
King of Prussia, PA USA

0 posted 2000-08-20 12:11 PM


Mythical meadow
in my mind,
tranquility abounds.

Mystical meadow,
where imagination
is all that's
required.
A meadow that
smells like  the
pungent woods
mingled with sweet
summer grass.
The sunbeams and
soft breezes
play with the wild
flowers, and songs
are everwhere.
Melodies and musings
of sweet summers past,
and a lullaby that
sings in the trees,
brings a sleepy haze,
that lulls and craddles
slumbering rest.
Here there is no
beginning or end,
only the now of a
haunting repose.


Summers haunting melody
that awakens
the butterflies,
calling them to join
the dance
in their silent song
of praise to God.

eL

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vlraynes
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since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...
1 posted 2000-08-20 01:16 PM



ellie-
   this is beautiful.  mind if i join
   you in that mythical, mystical meadow?
   love this!    

   -vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his
heart, you have not truely met the poet.
   -vlraynes


[This message has been edited by vlraynes (edited 08-20-2000).]

deleeme
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since 1999-10-09
Posts 1766
NEW ENGLAND, USA
2 posted 2000-08-20 02:03 PM


As aptly  and as wonderfully as you've describe your mystic meadow- I'm sure many would love to come and Join you there, myself included.  Let me know- when you are taking the next guided tour!
           LOL   David

Denise
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3 posted 2000-08-20 07:30 PM


Just lovely, Ellie!

Denise

Lakewalker
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since 2000-08-05
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4 posted 2000-08-20 07:32 PM


Ah, it was so relaxing reading this, a very lovely picture you've placed in my mind.
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5 posted 2000-08-20 10:20 PM


Ellie~
A trip to the meadow is oh, so serene.
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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pegasus111
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since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219
ocala, fl, usa
6 posted 2000-08-20 11:26 PM


ahhh, Ellie..you are fast becoming one of my favorite poets..soo lovely..

the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost

Alle'cram
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since 2000-02-28
Posts 1816
Texas
7 posted 2000-08-20 11:33 PM


~loved this meadow~lovely.    Marcy
dgvarner
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since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552
High Springs, Florida
8 posted 2000-08-20 11:34 PM


me too! me too!  i want to join you in your meadow    

eL..this is so calming..very nice read..how nice to smell the woods and summer grass while relaxing in the meadow..

  dg


"Half of what i say is meaningless; but i say it so that the other half may reach you."
-Kahlil Gibran


juliet_2u
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since 2000-07-23
Posts 1125
North Carolina
9 posted 2000-08-21 02:33 AM


Oh Ellie, the beautiful images I could see here. Thank you so much for that.
Juls

Dennis L. White
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since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463
Michigan, U.S.A.
10 posted 2000-08-21 06:49 AM


Ellie,
  Once again I am transported far from the cares of this world to the beautiful mystical meadow of serenity, and what a marvelous visit it is! Thank you once again for enchanting me with your lovely poetry! P.U.Y.M.S.
Dennis :^)  

Moonbeams radiate
When the veiling cloud has past
Playful shadows dance

Dennis L. White :^)

BSC
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11 posted 2000-08-21 01:31 PM


Oh Ellie, I want to go to the meadow too, such a wonderful scene you write of so well.  I'd like to see it in the sunlight and stay until Marge's moonbeams dance around there.  This is beautiful.  Bonnie
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