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Lost Dreamer
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since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464
Somewhere near the Rainbow

0 posted 2000-08-20 08:46 AM


Rainbows Sea

Token bits of permissible treasures
laid into my folded hands so bland,
tickling the delicateness with peace
as I tread so softly on blessed land.

Little tear stained reminders blend
into horizons new destiny for me,
caught in blinding rain storm once
golden visions now at rainbows sea.

Journey of precious hearts encasing
quaking altitudes in distant thought,
creasing hands of time to it's motion
nothing can compare or be bought.

Tracing finger latitudes through miles
touching, feeling, tasting his love,
farming the harvest to reap reward
fitting it onto my heart like a glove.


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kelieth
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since 2000-06-12
Posts 314
Normal IL - USA
1 posted 2000-08-20 11:10 AM


Heart felt whispers
call to me
they pull me
closer to the sea

They call me
to the horizon deep
flowing calmly
across the sea

Her blissful smile
and eloquent grace
her warm eyes
and gentle face

I'm blushing now
but not from wine
her heart fits warmly
here next to mine.
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Kevin

"Anything is possible with patience, time is the tool use it to reach your goals."




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juliet_2u
Senior Member
since 2000-07-23
Posts 1125
North Carolina
2 posted 2000-08-20 11:56 AM


This is so lovely. Really enjoyed reading it.
Juls

ellie LeJeune
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since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156
King of Prussia, PA USA
3 posted 2000-08-20 11:59 AM


Exquisitely lovely! Beautiful imagery too!
ellie

Summers haunting melody
that awakens
the butterflies,
calling them to join
the dance
in their silent song
of praise to God.

eL

Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648

4 posted 2000-08-20 07:33 PM


Very beautiful, Gloria!

Denise

Alle'cram
Senior Member
since 2000-02-28
Posts 1816
Texas
5 posted 2000-08-20 11:45 PM


Dreamer,  This is lovely!!
Storms are life's natural occurances, just thank God for the rainbows He sends.Good job.   Marcy

dgvarner
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since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552
High Springs, Florida
6 posted 2000-08-21 02:56 PM


very nice writing lost dreamer     

dg


"Half of what i say is meaningless; but i say it so that the other half may reach you."
-Kahlil Gibran


Majestic
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since 2000-01-11
Posts 264
houston, tx.
7 posted 2000-08-21 03:34 PM


very beautiful...

"To live is to love; To truly LOVE is to live!" ~kg~



brian madden
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since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374
ireland
8 posted 2000-08-21 04:11 PM


WOW LD, a stunning piece amazing images beautifully written, what more can I say except this is an wonderful poem.

"Beyond all this good is the terror,The grip of a mercenary hand,When savagery turns all good reason, There's no turning back, no last stand,"I.Curtis

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