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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore 
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On Monday morning, Sleepy heads nod in rhythm On their way to school |
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INclan Senior Member
since 1999-07-20
Posts 1024Indiana, USA |
Oh, well done Kaile. It is good to meet a poet who knows the diference between a Haiku and a Senryu. You nicely captured the moment. INclan |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
Perfection! A sweet picture, ah, is it nearly fall already? Ellie Summers haunting melody that awakens the butterflies, calling them to join the dance in their silent song of praise to God. eL |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
This is so cute, thanks for the read  |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Ooh I agree,...very cute. Can see this one so well. Thank you. *Peace. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Ahhh, this is soooo cute! Denise |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Kaile~ You are just adorable ... and that's a cute Senryu ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
this is so sweet i remember those days when we were all sleepyheads on the bus! and how funny as we got older, to watch the younger ones nod together on the way to school...(while we older ones cut up and made all the noise!) thanks for the memories! dg "Half of what i say is meaningless; but i say it so that the other half may reach you." -Kahlil Gibran |
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juliet_2u Senior Member
since 2000-07-23
Posts 1125North Carolina |
Wow did this hit home. My baby girl just started kindergarden this year and I could see her sleepy little face. Thanks so much for the images. Juls |
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Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. |
Kaile, I love this senryu, this is so true! Dennis :^) Moonbeams radiate When the veiling cloud has past Playful shadows dance Dennis L. White :^) |
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Mon Cherie
since 2001-10-31
Posts 922Land of Never-ending Summers |
I know this!!!! I used to do it everyday I had morning classes, actually... heheh... and for 3 long years!! Goodness!  _,,,^.^,,,_ |
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