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dgvarner
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since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552
High Springs, Florida

0 posted 2000-08-19 11:31 PM


i shouldnt post this as its such a babbling effect..but with a title of warning as such..perhaps you'll read it openly and forgive the very nature of it!  the heart is a bit sporatic at times..hence the occassional rhyme, and the stop-and-go of it..    i hope its not TOO terrible! dg
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i was in the area,
i passed the street
where i would have turned
to meet you at your door...
i went about my business that day
and knew that i would pass that way
again...
but i wouldnt stop.
i lingered--
in my heart.
i made the turns and
stopped to knock--
in my mind.
and you were there
and opened the door before i could
finish the note i would leave--
but you werent.
and i didnt...
i know
you and i need different things.
i'm sure you and i will be fine
in time,
this way...
but i miss your eyes
i still taste your kiss
i miss your arms
and passion bliss
i miss your warmth
your breath on my neck
your smile, your wit
and i have to bet
you miss something about me too...
there wasnt time to call it love!
but a short-lived
momentary
matter-of-fact
passionate sort of thing,
a what-do-you-call-it
by societies mind--
a relationship sort of thing?
and here is where i sigh...
i sit to think upon my thoughts--
cushion not so fluff...
i'll be myself again in time
and you'll be on your way.
i dont know the thoughts upon you
or the things that you wont say--
but i was in the area
and i thought of you that day...

-dgvarner


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Denise
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since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648

1 posted 2000-08-19 11:40 PM


Nothing to apologize for, dg. This is very good! A real 'from the heart' piece that I could 'feel'.

Denise

pegasus111
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since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219
ocala, fl, usa
2 posted 2000-08-19 11:50 PM


this is where I am right now, dg, so I can relate strongly to this.

the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost

juliet_2u
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since 2000-07-23
Posts 1125
North Carolina
3 posted 2000-08-20 12:42 PM


Awww dg I think it's wonderful. Reminds me and some of my thinking sometimes.
Juls

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...
4 posted 2000-08-20 03:40 AM



dg-
  babble on my dear...been right
  there with you many many times.  
  remember the feeling muchly.  

  love ya,
     tricks  

"I have read your words, and within
them I have found your heart.
                  -vlraynes

allan
Senior Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 620
On the road
5 posted 2000-08-20 07:10 AM


I found this very touching and real...
dgvarner
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since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552
High Springs, Florida
6 posted 2000-08-20 10:34 AM


really?  you guys like this? wow...thanks so much for reading..for responding..for being so kind!      i really appreciate the goodness of you people  

dg


"Half of what i say is meaningless; but i say it so that the other half may reach you."
-Kahlil Gibran


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