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kelieth
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since 2000-06-12
Posts 314
Normal IL - USA

0 posted 2000-08-19 02:35 AM


The August rains
started today,
I long for her
in every way.

Hoping she
sees my smile
praying love
will stay a while.

Getting ready
sweet red wine,
as the clock
tolls the time.

The fire burns
in the hearth
as she knocks
to be heard.

A small smile
on her face
melts my heart
this rainy day.

A shy hello
from her lips
tender, smooth, and
long to be kissed.

Taking her
by her hearts’ desire
leading her
by the fire.

Slowly filling full
her wine glass
she grins again
and lightly laughs.

Feeling passion
build inside
the fires’ glow
her eyes to wide.

A tender kiss
to help begin
the music of love
once again

Singing to
a private song.
passionate love
for us it longs.

With gentle moves
by loves grace
the restricting clothes
is stripped of place

They lay scattered
on the floor
so our true love
may endure.

The sensuous feels
and wondrous touch
of skin so soft,
lead by love.

Kissing her tender lips
moving down every inch
of her soft sweet skin
kissing and loving every bit.

I slowly reach her mountain tops
and suckle sweetly her firm love
as the movements down below
Long to find her valleys’ floor.

With a rhythm slow to start
following the dance with our hearts.
The passion does pick up the beat
as her heart sings to me.

With loving groans filling the air
The passion deep as we prepare
The moment of our passions spree
Our loving hearts increase their beat.

With a final search so deep
I feel her shudder strong beneath
knowing that I, thus could please
the lady with, eyes of green.

We lay in love
the rest of the night
reveling by
the fire side.

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Kevin

"Anything is possible with patience, time is the tool use it to reach your goals."




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ladysixstring
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since 2000-07-27
Posts 374

1 posted 2000-08-19 04:23 AM


Completely romantic!  I really like... "the fires’ glow her eyes to wide."  Shows attention to detail... a noticing of every move your lover makes.

-jaimie
www.ladysixstring.com



Jon Mewett
Senior Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304

2 posted 2000-08-19 05:00 AM


Whoa .........real hot in here...a poem that says hot indeed... nice

Jon

dgvarner
Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552
High Springs, Florida
3 posted 2000-08-19 08:24 AM


WOOHOO!!  we might have to move your passion to the adult forum there buddy!  

very nice ..very passionate..  

more more!!  

dg


"Half of what i say is meaningless; but i say it so that the other half may reach you."
-Kahlil Gibran


juliet_2u
Senior Member
since 2000-07-23
Posts 1125
North Carolina
4 posted 2000-08-20 02:37 AM


Ummm well, WOW, lol. Man this is smokin. I do think I'm a bit flushed now. And as Jon so elegantly put it....whoa..hehe. Great read.
Juls

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...
5 posted 2000-08-20 02:46 AM



kevin-
  WOW!!  Incredible passion and romance.
  Really like this...is it just me, or
  is it a little warm in here?  

  -vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his
heart, you have not truely met the poet.
  -vlraynes

dgvarner
Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552
High Springs, Florida
6 posted 2000-08-20 08:03 PM


heehee..yeah, its a little warm in here tricks!  fires are burnin'!!  kevin is...WEE-DOGGIES!!  
dg


"Half of what i say is meaningless; but i say it so that the other half may reach you."
-Kahlil Gibran


SpitFire
Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396

7 posted 2000-08-20 08:10 PM


~Hi there,...I believe this is the first of your work I have had the pleasure of reading. *sigh*,...my oh my what a read it is! Wonderfully passionate. Totally captivating. Enjoyed. Take care now. *Peace.
Dennis L. White
Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463
Michigan, U.S.A.
8 posted 2000-08-21 03:03 PM


Kevin,
  A beautiful read of passions dance and shared romance! This IS HOT!
Dennis :^)

brian madden
Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374
ireland
9 posted 2000-08-21 04:15 PM


Ignore me with my camera hidding in the wardrobe, I lost my glasses, yes my glasses...Kevin, I am sorry you were using the bedromm for..ER Hello...Are not going to introduce me to your lovely lady friend..Ok just leaving. LOL

seriously a very sensual and beautiful poem, any chance of getting my camera back?


"Beyond all this good is the terror,The grip of a mercenary hand,When savagery turns all good reason, There's no turning back, no last stand,"I.Curtis

kelieth
Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 314
Normal IL - USA
10 posted 2000-08-22 12:04 PM


Thank you all for responding to my poem here

Kevin

"Anything is possible with patience, time is the tool use it to reach your goals."

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