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ellie LeJeune
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0 posted 2000-08-19 02:17 AM


Dressed in black satin
scavenger sounding cawful
dining on roadkill

© Copyright 2000 ellie LeJeune - All Rights Reserved
ladysixstring
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1 posted 2000-08-19 04:13 AM


Well... I'm not quite sure what to say... ummm... good?  Actually, this was a bit mystical - starting with the title which beckoned me from my email check to "follow my link... follow my link... follow my link."  Pretty cool!!

-jaimie
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Marge Tindal
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2 posted 2000-08-19 04:17 AM


Ellie~

Vultures circling
Zeroing in on buffet
Dine Freeway Cafe


Ewwwwwwwww !
~*Marge*~


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Jon Mewett
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3 posted 2000-08-19 05:43 AM


Wow.....Incisive......

Jon

BSC
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4 posted 2000-08-19 09:03 AM


Ah Ellie I think I saw this act last night... Wonderful little piece.  Bonnie

Pond scum in crystal
Perfect accompaniment
To a roadside feast


dgvarner
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5 posted 2000-08-19 09:33 AM


aw jeez!   thats just not a pretty picture!  

but very creative eL!  

dg

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Dennis L. White
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since 2000-02-17
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6 posted 2000-08-19 11:37 AM


Sis,
The Roadkill Cafe
Open for black satin crew
Get it while it's hot!

Ellie, you crack me up :^)
Dennis :^)

Moonbeams radiate
When the veiling cloud has past
Playful shadows dance

Dennis L. White :^)

deleeme
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since 1999-10-09
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NEW ENGLAND, USA
7 posted 2000-08-19 03:42 PM


What a Dive this is!
But at least the food is free
And oft' tenderized!

Good one Ellie-what will you come up with next?             David

kaile
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8 posted 2000-08-19 07:33 PM


ellie, gosh , this is originality at its finest! thanx for this creative read
juliet_2u
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9 posted 2000-08-19 11:10 PM


Ummm Ellie, you shocked me on this one, lol. Shall I say a tastey little treat? No that's not right. How bout very creative and fun? Loved it girl.
Juls

vlraynes
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10 posted 2000-08-20 04:08 AM




           roadkill recipe
roll flat...let stand till pungent
          tantalizing treat

               -vlraynes

                YUCK!!!

ellie-
   very creative.  gotta love this one.    

   -vicky
      


[This message has been edited by vlraynes (edited 08-20-2000).]

INclan
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11 posted 2000-08-20 07:02 AM


Quoth the Raven, "Nevermore."
SpitFire
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12 posted 2000-08-20 07:10 PM


~Ick! Right on!!! Yep. Good one E. *Peace.
Alle'cram
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13 posted 2000-08-20 08:45 PM


(LOL)- Ellie, this is great- made me smile- I
can't get past the title-lol-loved it. marcy

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