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MMoonchild
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0 posted 2000-08-18 12:32 PM


To Me...To Him...a friendly Haiku dance

I Slept Past Rising

The moon flew all night,
I spent dark watching,
While dreams of dance kept playing,
Sphere of pale shimmering light
Till smiles greet daylight.
I slept past rising.


I waited in dark
As clouds phased in, covering
Your touches, your mark

Then danced in my deep
'Til the movements exhausted
And eased me to sleep.


M..the tinman and I
*2k


© Copyright 2000 Maureen - All Rights Reserved
blackhalo
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1 posted 2000-08-18 12:34 PM


Nice, I like this one.  A true dance.
Alicia

Denise
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2 posted 2000-08-18 07:29 PM


Very nice!

Denise

MMoonchild
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3 posted 2000-08-21 02:23 AM


Alicia
Denise

thank you both  for your kind responses ...
~~soft smiles
Maureen

juliet_2u
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4 posted 2000-08-21 02:26 AM


Ah so tender, so warm. Made me smile to read it.
Juls

Lakewalker
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5 posted 2000-08-21 10:24 AM


This was great, thank you so much for sharing it with us
MMoonchild
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6 posted 2000-08-22 12:56 PM


Juls
Lakewalker...
thankyou both for taking the time to read and respond
~~soft hugs
Maureen

* I know I am behind responding to others now ...I am just trying to catch up on mine  first then will read others..please be patient with me  

Yu Lan
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7 posted 2000-08-22 01:31 AM


wow.. beaUtiful, MMoonchild.. love this..
-Love,
Lynne

MMoonchild
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8 posted 2000-08-22 11:36 AM


Lynne

happy you enjoyed..
~~soft smiles
Maureen

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