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pegasus111
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0 posted 2000-08-18 06:40 AM



This poet begs your absolution,
for unsolicited intrusion,
into your space with trite profusion,
this deluge of debased delusion,

fued in part by useless babble,
cleaved from games of boring scrabble,
into which I often dabble,
with other incipid rabble,

judge not too harshly words as such,
from those who often talk too much,
for someday trapped in wordy clutch,
you too may use it as a crutch

the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost

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Alle'cram
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since 2000-02-28
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1 posted 2000-08-18 09:05 AM


pegasus111,  I found this a fun read. So you think it may be the insipid riffraff crowd sparking this inspiration. Like it  
Lady Lost
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2 posted 2000-08-18 09:05 AM


A poem about me!! LOL..."Motor Mouth"...my nickname since I have been two years old...my Mom and Dad still call me that!  Great piece...really enjoyed it!......beth

You can never have too much fiction; reality can be such a bore

Lakewalker
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On the streets w/ people
3 posted 2000-08-18 11:54 AM


I like the rhyme here and it flowed good, great poem
pegasus111
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4 posted 2000-08-18 05:26 PM


thanks friends..thought you could use a chuckle..

the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost

Denise
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5 posted 2000-08-18 07:42 PM


Delightful! Thanks for the chuckle!  

Denise

dgvarner
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6 posted 2000-08-19 11:05 AM


ha..ok, well..my late nite babble was simple!  heehee..this was a really fun read  

dg


"Half of what i say is meaningless; but i say it so that the other half may reach you."
-Kahlil Gibran


pegasus111
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7 posted 2000-08-19 03:15 PM


dg..your work is anything but simple

Denice...Made you laugh!  lol

the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost

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