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MMoonchild
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0 posted 2000-08-18 02:06 AM


Let Me

I would like to be a butterfly
And come along for that ride,
Over the hard and into the wind
Breathing in life as you fly.

I could be resting upon your heart,
You can make me your love's tattoo.
Then always I''d be along for the ride,
And travel life's roads with you.

I would like to be a butterfly
And come along for that ride,
Iron man beneath my seat
With strength enough to guide.

And share together views ahead
Of beauty, so serene,
And with my brush of words, I'd paint
A canvas, nature's scene.


M
8*2k

© Copyright 2000 Maureen - All Rights Reserved
monique
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since 2000-02-03
Posts 369
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1 posted 2000-08-18 02:33 AM


mmmmmmmmmm  vroom vroom
this reminds me of riding with my girl friend on her red and white Honda Shadow
on country road admiring the scenery
and stopping sometime to enjoy nature
and lay down on the ground and get bit by ants
mmmmmmmmmm i love your poem

monique



pegasus111
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since 2000-07-27
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ocala, fl, usa
2 posted 2000-08-18 03:54 AM


lovely piece..brings back memories of my youth..

the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost

Lost Dreamer
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Somewhere near the Rainbow
3 posted 2000-08-18 05:07 AM


MMoonchild, What an enjoyable poem, I really like it : )
MMoonchild
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4 posted 2000-08-18 07:17 AM



monique..love that ride...everything but the ants...*s
~~soft thanks
Maureen



Lakewalker
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since 2000-08-05
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On the streets w/ people
5 posted 2000-08-18 11:48 AM


What a beautiful thought here Maureen, thanks for sharing it
MMoonchild
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6 posted 2000-08-18 02:16 PM


pegasus111

hmmm..is bringing me memories of a "new youth"
~~soft smiles and a thank you
Maureen

MMoonchild
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7 posted 2000-08-20 09:22 PM


Lost Dreamer
and
Lakewalker
... thank you for your  kind responses
~~soft smiles
Maureen

juliet_2u
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since 2000-07-23
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8 posted 2000-08-21 09:35 AM


Maureen, what a happy read. Made me smile.
Juls

MMoonchild
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9 posted 2000-08-21 09:10 PM


thank you Juls.. happy to have you ~smile
Maureen

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