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pegasus111
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since 2000-07-27
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ocala, fl, usa

0 posted 2000-08-17 03:41 PM



grey wolf calls
fading echos swirling
along starlit trail


the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost

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JOY 14
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since 1999-09-22
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Wisconsin USA
1 posted 2000-08-17 05:56 PM


could see every line in my head. Good description of the wilderness!

Joy

Dennis L. White
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since 2000-02-17
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Michigan, U.S.A.
2 posted 2000-08-17 06:04 PM


Pegasus111,
  Good wilderness imagery, could almost smell the pines.
Dennis :^)

Moonbeams radiate
When the veiling cloud has past
Playful shadows dance

Dennis L. White :^)

ellie LeJeune
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since 2000-01-10
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King of Prussia, PA USA
3 posted 2000-08-17 06:20 PM


Great job, I could hear tha ol wolf a howling at the moon! ellie
Lakewalker
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since 2000-08-05
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On the streets w/ people
4 posted 2000-08-18 12:08 PM


I can just see it all in my head.  Very well done, I enjoyed this
Alle'cram
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since 2000-02-28
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Texas
5 posted 2000-08-18 12:25 PM


oh me, oh my, I saw a canyon and I thought I heard the echo!  Great job.  Marcy  
I just love these.

allan
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since 2000-04-09
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On the road
6 posted 2000-08-18 05:05 PM


Magical - took me immediately to a new wonderful place.

Wow - that's the the power of Haiku!  

pegasus111
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since 2000-07-27
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ocala, fl, usa
7 posted 2000-08-18 05:28 PM


thanks guys..my cup runneth over..

the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost

kaile
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singapore
8 posted 2000-09-14 12:08 PM


ditto the others' comments..this is a sheer beauty
Moon Dust
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9 posted 2000-09-14 01:23 PM


lovely

Words flow heavily,
A carbon copy of my heart,
As well as my soul.

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