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Darkened Treasures
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since 2000-07-19
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0 posted 2000-08-16 10:36 PM


B eauty beyond compare
E ffervescence excites the air
T houghtful twilight that sparkels in the eyes
H onesty hastens a heartbeat's cries
A morous ambition pervades the the body whole
N atural nobility wraps like a stole
N ominal nihilism now cast aside...
             ...for the poet to extoll




Who would have thought a good little girl like you could destroy my beautiful wickedness.

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Denise
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1 posted 2000-08-16 10:40 PM


Beautifully done acrostic! She sounds special!

Denise

pegasus111
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since 2000-07-27
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ocala, fl, usa
2 posted 2000-08-17 01:25 AM


sounds very special..   as is this fine acrostic.

the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost

Lady Lost
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since 2000-07-13
Posts 470

3 posted 2000-08-17 09:34 AM


You are absolutely amazing.  I had no idea you were going to do this! What can I say? I don't know..maybe that you are the most thoughtful man I know.  Thank you!!!  Now its your turn to keep an eye out for something special.....
Love,
B
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You can never have too much fiction; reality can be such a bore

Lakewalker
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since 2000-08-05
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On the streets w/ people
4 posted 2000-08-17 12:34 PM


Very nicely done
Lost Dreamer
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Somewhere near the Rainbow
5 posted 2000-08-18 06:04 AM


Wow, awesome acrostic, you did a fabulous job  
MMoonchild
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PA
6 posted 2000-08-23 07:21 PM


beautiful....
loved it, nice to see someone who loves acrostics also
~~soft smiles
Maureen

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Florida's Foreverly Shores
7 posted 2000-08-23 08:56 PM


DarkenedTreasures~
Well, isn't this just an adoring acrostic !
Somebody is smiling, I'll bet !  
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com



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