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BSC

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since 2000-02-04

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New York, USA

0 posted 2000-08-16 09:21 AM

Summer is waning
asters will soon be in bloom
welcoming Autumn

pegasus111
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since 2000-07-27

Posts 2219
ocala, fl, usa

1 posted 2000-08-16 10:24 AM

this is lovely..

the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost

Lakewalker
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since 2000-08-05

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On the streets w/ people

2 posted 2000-08-16 10:40 AM

Ah yes, Autumn, a lovely time of the year. Great haiku

Dennis L. White
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since 2000-02-17

Posts 1463
Michigan, U.S.A.

3 posted 2000-08-16 11:31 AM

Bonnie,
This is a well written traditional Haiku!
Well Done!
Dennis :^)

Moonbeams radiate
When the veiling cloud has past
Playful shadows dance

Dennis L. White :^)

Alle'cram
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since 2000-02-28

Posts 1816
Texas

4 posted 2000-08-16 03:55 PM

Dear Bonnie,
I agree with your words to me, so much said in so few lines. Really good job with this one and I'm ready for cooler temps.!

allan
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since 2000-04-09

Posts 620
On the road

5 posted 2000-08-16 04:21 PM

Yes, love the thought that went into this...

allan

deleeme
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since 1999-10-09

Posts 1766
NEW ENGLAND, USA

6 posted 2000-08-16 05:29 PM

Bravo Bonnie-
Summer has been super- but I'm ready for a new & cooler beginning of autumn-in all it's special radiance! Good reminder, David

ellie LeJeune
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since 2000-01-10

Posts 4156
King of Prussia, PA USA

7 posted 2000-08-16 08:23 PM

Breathtakingly beautiful little picture of all the beauty of autumn yet to come! You are very good at this, dear Bonnie! love, ellie

Summers haunting melody
that awakens
the butterflies,
calling them to join
the dance
in their silent song
of praise to God.

eL

Denise

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8 posted 2000-08-16 10:23 PM

Very beautiful, Bonnie!

Denise

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

9 posted 2000-08-17 10:46 PM

Bonnie~

Summer splendor sighs
Daffodil upon the hill
Kisses soft goodbye

~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

kaile

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since 2000-02-06

Posts 5146
singapore

10 posted 2000-08-18 09:27 PM

a simple piece longing for the simple pleasures of autumn....i liked

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