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dgvarner
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0 posted 2000-08-16 12:17 PM


..my grandfather...was very handy    he had this little bar he built in the corner of his garage..he'd entertain friends..and family..and often he and his brothers would get together and play music..as he got older, the bar began sitting empty more and more...this is its story  

      ----------------------------------------

ancient whiskey bottles
standing tall
amidst dust
and spiders weave.
bottles of crystal
glistening shyly
holding memory
of days gone by.
replicated laughter
bellows from within
obscure smiles--
and tears of some...
     liquid innards
          splash to the music
     and gently glide
          with the dance...
though still now,
the music has stopped
and quiet,
the laughter is silenced
you must believe
in the ancient stories
you must listen close
to hear--
but listen.
listen with your heart--
dont miss the songs of time.

-dgvarner

"Half of what i say is meaningless; but i say it so that the other half may reach you."
-Kahlil Gibran


© Copyright 2000 dgvarner - All Rights Reserved
Jon Mewett
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1 posted 2000-08-16 02:23 AM


This is so soft and warm .....lovely memories DGV....lovely poem..

Jon

pegasus111
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2 posted 2000-08-16 08:01 AM


This was lovely dg..a soothing read..thanks for sharing it.

the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost

Lakewalker
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3 posted 2000-08-16 11:05 AM


Wow, this is a story so nicely told.  I'm putting this one away to read again later, it's great!
dgvarner
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4 posted 2000-08-16 11:48 AM


jon, peg, lake:  thanks for your warm replies!
this one has a bunch of special mind- pictures that accompany it for me..i hope you got a glimpse of them  

dg

"Half of what i say is meaningless; but i say it so that the other half may reach you."
-Kahlil Gibran


Lady Lost
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5 posted 2000-08-16 11:52 AM


I love this!! how sweet memories can be..this is an excellent poem, I really enjoyed it!...........beth

You can never have too much fiction; reality can be such a bore

Wobbly Head Bob
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6 posted 2000-08-16 01:35 PM


Dg, you've made me realize just how precious moments every moment really is...How much I'm going to miss my first house (which entertained 20-40 people any given night) and all my friends...how I have to hold on right now to what I've got before my laughter fades, and the music slowly dies away.  Thankyou so much!
Marsha
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7 posted 2000-08-17 05:16 AM


Yet more beauty, in the silence of remembered laughter and song. Truly a gift I'm in Dee heaven!
allan
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On the road
8 posted 2000-08-17 03:16 PM


Yes, I really savoured this one. Beautiful...

allan

Lost Dreamer
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9 posted 2000-08-18 05:54 AM


dg, I like the thoughts behind this poem and the thoughts it brought to my mind. Excellent writing I really enjoyed  
Alle'cram
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10 posted 2000-08-18 11:23 AM


dg, So lovely and soft. Special memories. Very well written. marcy
dgvarner
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11 posted 2000-08-18 04:05 PM


big thanks to all of you responding to this one     !!  

much appreciate the attention youre giving to the memories of my papaw's corner "pub"!!      dg
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"Half of what i say is meaningless; but i say it so that the other half may reach you."
-Kahlil Gibran



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Marge Tindal
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12 posted 2000-08-19 03:49 AM


DGVarner~
What a delightful read.
How nice of you to save me a stool at 'pawpaws' corner pub !
I hear the laughter bouncing off the walls.
~*Marge*~


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dgvarner
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13 posted 2000-08-19 08:15 AM


marge: isnt it great!  the laughter..the smiles..the raspy voices of papaw and his brothers...the banjo, the guitar, auto harp, violen, harmonica......WOW!  i hope you enjoy it as much as i     ...

thanks for pulling up a stool marge!  dg

"Half of what i say is meaningless; but i say it so that the other half may reach you."
-Kahlil Gibran


kelieth
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14 posted 2000-08-19 07:36 PM


dg great piece Enjoyed reading it so serene.  



Kevin

"Anything is possible with patience, time is the tool use it to reach your goals."

kaile
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15 posted 2000-08-19 07:45 PM


i am listening with my heart now and hoping earnestly i dont miss anything...

liked this muchly...through your poem, i feel as though i have a weeny glimpse into another world....

dgvarner
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16 posted 2000-08-21 12:01 PM


kevin: glad you enjoyed reading me     thanks!  

kaile: keep listening..i might have more tucked away i'll share with you      

dg
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"Half of what i say is meaningless; but i say it so that the other half may reach you."
-Kahlil Gibran



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vlraynes
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Somewhere... out there...
17 posted 2000-08-21 12:23 PM



dg-
  sorry i was so slow in responding
  to this.  i really love it.  
  reminded me of being there...getting
  to meet your papaw.  

  love ya,
      tricks

"I have read your words, and within them
I have found your heart.
                 -vlraynes

dgvarner
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18 posted 2000-08-22 12:00 PM


thanks tricks    

...wish we could do that trip again!  

dg


"Half of what i say is meaningless; but i say it so that the other half may reach you."
-Kahlil Gibran


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