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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
a smile for today forgotten sorrows in time shrug tickles giggle -dgvarner "Half of what i say is meaningless; but i say it so that the other half may reach you." -Kahlil Gibran [This message has been edited by dgvarner (edited 08-15-2000).] |
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Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. |
DgV, This is delightful medicine for those pains that linger! Very good! Dennis :^) Moonbeams radiate When the veiling cloud has past Playful shadows dance Dennis L. White :^) |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
...and dont we know i have pains that linger!!! LOL trying to take my own medicine! thanks for reading dennis dg "Half of what i say is meaningless; but i say it so that the other half may reach you." -Kahlil Gibran |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Ooh Happy thoughts for the moment,...let's run. Very cool one. Can I ask you a question that I should probably know the answer to,....what is a senyru? A haiku? (exactly)...I have just followed the 5-7-5 of all the other haikus,...but is there something I should know? *I'm a little out there these days,...in left field* Thank you. *Peace. |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Great poem, I really made me think (I need to do that sometimes) SpitFire: As far as I understand, haiku deals with a nature subject and senryu doesn't, but both have the 5-7-5 pattern. |
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allan Senior Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 620On the road |
This gave me a deep within chuckle - I can use all of those I can get...! Delightful... allan |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
spitfire..i'm sorry! for some reason i thought to send you an explanation to your icq on haiku,senyru, and tanka..i didnt even answer your question here...oops! forgive me..(lakewalker answered you correctly )and thank you for reading my senyru glad you liked it!! lakewalker..we all need to think sometimes..it made me think too! heehee thanks for answering spitfire while i sat in a daze!! haha allan..chuckles are good--glad i could help with that dg "Half of what i say is meaningless; but i say it so that the other half may reach you." -Kahlil Gibran |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
I love the happy feeling I got while reading this. Thanks for that! ellie Summers haunting melody that awakens the butterflies, calling them to join the dance in their silent song of praise to God. eL |
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Alle'cram Senior Member
since 2000-02-28
Posts 1816Texas |
dvg, This is so delightful....and informative too! LOL! "Shrug tickles giggle"...now think about that! I love it. (i'm speaking to me here, thinking about it) |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
eL: i hoped it would do that--it was meant to create a smile...cause i needed one myself! alle'cram: so glad you found this one delightful! i was on my way out of the "slumps"! (thats where it came from!) dg "Half of what i say is meaningless; but i say it so that the other half may reach you." -Kahlil Gibran |
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deleeme Senior Member
since 1999-10-09
Posts 1766NEW ENGLAND, USA |
And may you find an extra big smile for all the faces you've made happy with your delightful words here. David |
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BSC
Moderator
Member Elite
since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
dg - Add one more happy face, this is great gave me a little tee hee. Bonnie |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
david: thanks for the extra big smile wish bonnie: always glad to help with a "teehee"! glad you guys liked my little ditty dg "Half of what i say is meaningless; but i say it so that the other half may reach you." -Kahlil Gibran |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
It's a mile of smile. I love this, can't do them but I love it! Another bouquet, you'll be able to stock a florist at this rate! |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
add another satisfied reader to the list, dg....very nice advice for us all |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
thanks marsha and kaile..glad to lend a smile marsha: you can do this! i promise..(and i dont make promises...!) dg "Half of what i say is meaningless; but i say it so that the other half may reach you." -Kahlil Gibran |
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INclan Senior Member
since 1999-07-20
Posts 1024Indiana, USA |
Do I detect a playful heart? I hope you NEVER loose it! INclan |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
inclan: playful...hmm..could be... it lites up every now and then thanks for reading! dg "Half of what i say is meaningless; but i say it so that the other half may reach you." -Kahlil Gibran |
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juliet_2u Senior Member
since 2000-07-23
Posts 1125North Carolina |
dg, this made me smile too. Very lovely and fresh feeling. Juls |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
dg- what's this...18 responses and not one from me yet. how did that happen?! LOL 'shrug tickles giggle'...gotta luv that. thanks for the smile. love ya, -tricks |
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