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dgvarner
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0 posted 2000-08-15 01:44 PM



a smile for today
forgotten sorrows in time
shrug tickles giggle

-dgvarner
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"Half of what i say is meaningless; but i say it so that the other half may reach you."
-Kahlil Gibran



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Dennis L. White
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since 2000-02-17
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Michigan, U.S.A.
1 posted 2000-08-15 01:49 PM


DgV,
  This is delightful medicine for those pains that linger! Very good!
Dennis :^)

Moonbeams radiate
When the veiling cloud has past
Playful shadows dance

Dennis L. White :^)

dgvarner
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High Springs, Florida
2 posted 2000-08-15 01:52 PM


...and dont we know i have pains that linger!!!  LOL trying to take my own medicine!  

thanks for reading dennis  

dg

"Half of what i say is meaningless; but i say it so that the other half may reach you."
-Kahlil Gibran


SpitFire
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since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396

3 posted 2000-08-15 02:01 PM


~Ooh Happy thoughts for the moment,...let's run. Very cool one. Can I ask you a question that I should probably know the answer to,....what is a senyru? A haiku? (exactly)...I have just followed the 5-7-5 of all the other haikus,...but is there something I should know? *I'm a little out there these days,...in left field* Thank you. *Peace.
Lakewalker
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since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289
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4 posted 2000-08-15 02:32 PM


Great poem, I really made me think (I need to do that sometimes)  

SpitFire: As far as I understand, haiku deals with a nature subject and senryu doesn't, but both have the 5-7-5 pattern.

allan
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since 2000-04-09
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On the road
5 posted 2000-08-15 03:14 PM


This gave me a deep within chuckle - I can use all of those I can get...! Delightful...

allan

dgvarner
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6 posted 2000-08-15 04:43 PM


spitfire..i'm sorry!  for some reason i thought to send you an explanation to your icq on haiku,senyru, and tanka..i didnt even answer your question here...oops!  forgive me..(lakewalker answered you correctly   )and thank you for reading my senyru    glad you liked it!!

lakewalker..we all need to think sometimes..it made me think too! heehee  thanks for answering spitfire while i sat in a daze!! haha

allan..chuckles are good--glad i could help with that  

dg



"Half of what i say is meaningless; but i say it so that the other half may reach you."
-Kahlil Gibran


ellie LeJeune
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since 2000-01-10
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King of Prussia, PA USA
7 posted 2000-08-15 06:29 PM


I love the happy feeling I got while reading this. Thanks for that! ellie

Summers haunting melody
that awakens
the butterflies,
calling them to join
the dance
in their silent song
of praise to God.

eL

Alle'cram
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since 2000-02-28
Posts 1816
Texas
8 posted 2000-08-15 07:58 PM


dvg, This is so delightful....and informative too! LOL! "Shrug tickles giggle"...now think about that! I love it.  
(i'm speaking to me here, thinking about it)

dgvarner
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High Springs, Florida
9 posted 2000-08-15 10:29 PM


eL: i hoped it would do that--it was meant to create a smile...cause i needed one myself!  

alle'cram: so glad you found this one delightful!  i was on my way out of the "slumps"!  (thats where it came from!)

dg

"Half of what i say is meaningless; but i say it so that the other half may reach you."
-Kahlil Gibran


deleeme
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10 posted 2000-08-16 12:22 PM


And may you find an extra big smile for all the faces you've made happy with your delightful words here.  David
BSC
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11 posted 2000-08-16 09:18 AM


dg - Add one more happy face, this is great gave me a little tee hee.  Bonnie
dgvarner
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High Springs, Florida
12 posted 2000-08-16 12:02 PM


david: thanks for the extra big smile wish    

bonnie: always glad to help with a "teehee"!  

glad you guys liked my little ditty    

dg


"Half of what i say is meaningless; but i say it so that the other half may reach you."
-Kahlil Gibran


Marsha
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13 posted 2000-08-17 05:20 AM


It's a mile of smile. I love this, can't do them but I love it! Another bouquet, you'll be able to stock a florist at this rate!

kaile
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14 posted 2000-08-18 08:58 PM


add another satisfied reader to the list, dg....very nice advice for us all
dgvarner
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15 posted 2000-08-19 10:52 AM


thanks marsha and kaile..glad to lend a smile    

marsha:  you can do this!  i promise..(and i dont make promises...!)

dg


"Half of what i say is meaningless; but i say it so that the other half may reach you."
-Kahlil Gibran


INclan
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Indiana, USA
16 posted 2000-08-20 07:59 AM


Do I detect a playful heart?  I hope you NEVER loose it!

INclan

dgvarner
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High Springs, Florida
17 posted 2000-08-20 07:55 PM


inclan:  playful...hmm..could be...     it lites up every now and then  

thanks for reading!  dg


"Half of what i say is meaningless; but i say it so that the other half may reach you."
-Kahlil Gibran


juliet_2u
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North Carolina
18 posted 2000-08-20 09:11 PM


dg, this made me smile too. Very lovely and fresh feeling.
Juls

vlraynes
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19 posted 2000-08-21 01:49 AM



dg-
  what's this...18 responses and not one
  from me yet.  how did that happen?!  LOL
  'shrug tickles giggle'...gotta luv that.  
  thanks for the smile.  

  love ya,
      -tricks

  

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