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allan Senior Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 620On the road 
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like glittering bugs tiny flashes in the dark haikus find the light [This message has been edited by allan (edited 08-15-2000).] |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~You are one groovy guy Allan! I dig all you write. I find it all very worthwhile. Keep 'em coming please. Take care. *Peace. |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Very cool  |
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Alle'cram Senior Member
since 2000-02-28
Posts 1816Texas |
Your message so bright The glittering bugs in flight Flickering their lights I enjoyed the analogy of the Lightening bug's light to Haiku's. Good job (couldn't help myself with a little follow up)  Marcy |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
"tiny flashes in the dark" that they are! this is so great allan! i love it  dg "Half of what i say is meaningless; but i say it so that the other half may reach you." -Kahlil Gibran |
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allan Senior Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 620On the road |
Big thanks for all your kind comments! allan  |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
Allan; This is delightful! Very clever too. Summers haunting melody that awakens the butterflies, calling them to join the dance in their silent song of praise to God. eL |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
nice Allan..enjoyed the fluorescent color,also ~~smiles Maureen |
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BSC
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since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
Allan, Love the simple beauty in this one, and I love those little fireflies. Bonnie |
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Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. |
Allan, Haiku twinkles are ideal for us burnouts with the short attention spans, LOL.....now what was I saying, oh yeah, Good poem! Dennis :^) Moonbeams radiate When the veiling cloud has past Playful shadows dance Dennis L. White :^) |
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lotharingia Senior Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 897saarbruecken, Germany |
How delightful, allan! This reminds me of those green and bronze scarab beetles that buzz around my garden in Spring. And of glow worms, too. And of your poems. Lotharingia "Dreams are life, reality, creation" Miguel de Unanumo |
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pegasus111 Member Elite
since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219ocala, fl, usa |
supurb analogy allan... the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
an one written for all haiku lovers...very nice  |
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