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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396
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She Dances~~~(Haiku, My First) Twirling smiles wide lids softly closed in delight feet tickling earth. *Forgive me if it's incorrect. And if it is,...then let's just call it a poem from me...and not a haiku.  . |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Lovely. |
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pegasus111 Member Elite
since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219ocala, fl, usa |
this is delightful. incorrect? I think not.  the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Very enjoyable thought, thanks |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
very sweet..i can see her dancing... what a delightful world she is in...... dg "Half of what i say is meaningless; but i say it so that the other half may reach you." -Kahlil Gibran |
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Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. |
SpitFire, This is good, Write on sister! Dennis :^) Moonbeams radiate When the veiling cloud has past Playful shadows dance Dennis L. White :^) |
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allan Senior Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 620On the road |
It's difficult to count SpitFire. But what really counts is that it is wonderful! Really great warmth bringer this. well done! allan  |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
Very lovely....more... ellie |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
Spitfire, i believe the most important thing in haiku is to capture and freeze a moment in time and i think you have done well here MORE!!MORE!! |
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lotharingia Senior Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 897saarbruecken, Germany |
Fire, how cute! The feet tickling the earth made it perfect! Lotharingia "Dreams are life, reality, creation" Miguel de Unanumo |
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ladysixstring Member
since 2000-07-27
Posts 374 |
I'm in favor of popular opinion here... wonderful! -jaimie www.ladysixstring.com |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
I would have to concur with the general opinion. God grant me the serenity to accept the people I cannot change, the courage to change the one I can, and the wisdom to know it's me. ~Unknown |
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INclan Senior Member
since 1999-07-20
Posts 1024Indiana, USA |
SpitFire, The objective is to capture a moment with clarity of thought and expression. Well done! INclan |
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juliet_2u Senior Member
since 2000-07-23
Posts 1125North Carolina |
I found this lovely. Juls |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~I wanted to take a moment to thank all of you,... each and every one of you for the 'help' and the encouragement. So kind. Please take care of yourselves. *Peace.~ |
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