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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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To turn the wind The light sends faux pas of ruin Spewing from a half moons grin. Running chills down through my spine. Forming tears of aqua brine. It always starts with streams of gleams Little things that theme my dreams Winding the blaze to white hot thoughts That fire flash to why we fought. I love her, there's no question there. No matter when no matter where. Yet something always burs the dove Thorns the weave, sowers the love. A pendulum, a devils tail Swings to and fro with deadly dwale. Spreading poison in churned chaos Melting me to paupers pathos. But could we seam a shelled cocoon To weather through the lovers noon Then two could pierce the shell and fly Two wings that make a butterfly. And we would vie this Kismet goal, And join as two and make one soul. |
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pegasus111 Member Elite
since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219ocala, fl, usa |
avoiding conflict in a long term relationship is impossible. The trick is to disagree without destruction. this was a nice effort. thanks for sharing. the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost |
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Lady Lost Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 470 |
This is a very profound and interesting poem. I really enjoyed it.....beth You can never have too much fiction; reality can be such a bore |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
I would say, a short vacation away from each other, and you would both realize you can't live without each other. Parting makes the heart grow fonder Incidentally, the wording of this poem is tremendous Liz |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Sy, I love this! Especially this verse: But could we seam a shelled cocoon To weather through the lovers noon Then two could pierce the shell and fly Two wings that make a butterfly. |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
It always starts with streams of gleams Little things that theme my dreams Winding the blaze to white hot thoughts That fire flash to why we fought. well..I am enjoying your words immensely thank you~~soft smiles Maureen |
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BSC
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Member Elite
since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
Seymour, I can't pick just one verse that stands out as they are all outstanding. This is just wonderful. Bonnie |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
To all you wonderful poets that took time to reply to this poem I give you my warmest thanks. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Those 'butterfly moments' make it all worthwhile, don't they? Wonderful poem, Sy! Denise |
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