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Jamie
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since 2000-06-26
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Blue Heaven

0 posted 2000-08-15 07:45 AM


In My Eyes (haiku)

You’re still beautiful
like the fresh flowers of spring
blooming in summer





Jamie

Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil.
"Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely".



© Copyright 2000 Jamie Patterson - All Rights Reserved
pegasus111
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since 2000-07-27
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ocala, fl, usa
1 posted 2000-08-15 07:49 AM


a very pleasant read

the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost

ellie LeJeune
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since 2000-01-10
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King of Prussia, PA USA
2 posted 2000-08-15 07:55 AM


Simply enchantingly romantic! ellie

Summers haunting melody
that awakens
the butterflies,
calling them to join
the dance
in their silent song
of praise to God.

eL

Dennis L. White
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since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463
Michigan, U.S.A.
3 posted 2000-08-15 08:28 AM


Jamie,
  Beauty surpasses single seasons and endures! Nice Haiku!
Dennis :^)

dgvarner
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since 2000-05-13
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High Springs, Florida
4 posted 2000-08-15 08:51 AM


very nice jamie     and look, now YOU're in OUR eyes! ..good to see you  

dg

"Half of what i say is meaningless; but i say it so that the other half may reach you."
-Kahlil Gibran


Lakewalker
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since 2000-08-05
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On the streets w/ people
5 posted 2000-08-15 09:52 AM


Amazing as usual, I loved it
SpitFire
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since 2000-04-19
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6 posted 2000-08-15 10:04 AM


~Jamie,...(may I call you that?)...this haiku makes me smile. Your words,...so sweet. Your heart...huge. Take care P. *Peace.
Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
7 posted 2000-08-15 11:06 AM


Enjoyed
Alle'cram
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Texas
8 posted 2000-08-15 11:06 AM


I liked this one, good job.  Marcy  
Poet deVine
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Hurricane Alley
9 posted 2000-08-15 08:35 PM


Lovely and sweet!  
The Alchemist
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since 2000-07-23
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10 posted 2000-08-15 08:52 PM


I've got to try writing haikus...they seem like a lot of fun, and a lot of people are doing great jobs with them! You're one of them.  

The Alchemist

Dark Angel
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since 1999-08-04
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11 posted 2000-08-16 02:35 AM


sweet and warm Jamie  
wonderful!

Jamie
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since 2000-06-26
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Blue Heaven
12 posted 2000-08-17 12:24 PM


Thanks everyone... this one was written for somebody, who in my eyes,is as pretty now as they were 20 years ago... thanks again for the kindness you all show



Jamie

Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil.
"Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely".



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