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pegasus111 Member Elite
since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219ocala, fl, usa 
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I choose you in the winter with cold white blankets on the earth and downy fir around your face I choose you in the spring when love awakens within my breast and your sweet lips caress my cheek I choose you in the summer lush when heat waves shimmer over me and your damp skin takes my breath away I choose you in the fall when the forest drouses and the fallen leaves call us to their deepening bed I choose to lie with you entwined to touch you with my lips, my hands, my mind as your eyes asked to be touched I choose all of these things because I am a man who ceases to be a man if he cannot choose you the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
This is a wonderfuly romantic poem, written so beautifully. The intertwining of the seasons, a lovely touch. ellie Summers haunting melody that awakens the butterflies, calling them to join the dance in their silent song of praise to God. eL |
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Lady Lost Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 470 |
I agree with my mom..this is a lovely piece! Written so elequently, Great post!!......beth You can never have too much fiction; reality can be such a bore |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Great poem! I really think eL said it perfectly  [This message has been edited by Lakewalker (edited 08-15-2000).] |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Interesting god read. |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Good choice! Beautiful writing! Your wording and flow read so, so well to me. Mmm. Take care P. *Peace. |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
so very romantic... nicely worded.. youve done a wonderful job with this writing! dg "Half of what i say is meaningless; but i say it so that the other half may reach you." -Kahlil Gibran |
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Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. |
Pegasus111, This is a sensual, tender affirmation of love. Simply beautiful! Dennis :^) Moonbeams radiate When the veiling cloud has past Playful shadows dance Dennis L. White :^) |
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pegasus111 Member Elite
since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219ocala, fl, usa |
thank you, my new friends..since I am new, I must ask..Beth, is Ellie really your mother?.. the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost |
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Songbird Member Elite
since 1999-12-15
Posts 2184Missouri |
A man of all seasons! What a romatic poem! I got to check out the rest of your poems! |
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pegasus111 Member Elite
since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219ocala, fl, usa |
Septsong...thank you. I had forgotten about this one..you'll find most of them here and in Dark Passions #2.. the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost |
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compassion Member
since 2000-11-01
Posts 135USA |
Whoah, Peg!! I think you get your choice of who you choose after this poem.. Very romantic and soulful, touching and nice! |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Pegasus~ This is softly romantic - I'm pleased that it got pulled back up. I like the thoughts that flow so gently. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
This one just got to me---a simple expression of soul and nothing less--and THAT is poetry. I hope some day, some one feels the same about me, and if it's not too much to ask, I also hope he could tell me so, this beautifully.... |
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Broken_Winged_Angel Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 994Small Town, Somewhere |
Serenity, you took the words out of my mouth and soul...Fabulous read Pegasus!  |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Oh, this is bliss....what a guy!... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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pegasus111 Member Elite
since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219ocala, fl, usa |
Sunshine..you're gonna make me blush.. hey! I just found out about the newsletter..duh..what have I been looking at..lol the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost |
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Solstice Son Member
since 2000-09-19
Posts 469 |
ooooh laaaaaa laaaaaa...... after that..words fail me good job!!! Sol |
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