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Jamie
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Blue Heaven

0 posted 2000-08-14 12:06 PM


nocturnal whispers
fall gently upon my ears
a moon-kissed good night




Jamie

Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil.
"Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely".



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Jon Mewett
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1 posted 2000-08-14 12:26 PM


Soft and gentle.......lovely

Jon

Dennis L. White
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2 posted 2000-08-14 12:58 PM


Jamie,
  This one is sweet!
Dennis :^)

Moonbeams radiate
When the veiling cloud has past
Playful shadows dance

Dennis L. White :^)

Poet deVine
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3 posted 2000-08-14 08:39 PM


Beautiful!
Denise
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4 posted 2000-08-14 08:42 PM


Just lovely, Jamie!

Denise

ellie LeJeune
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5 posted 2000-08-15 05:40 AM


This is so gentle and soft, lovely. ellie

Summers haunting melody
that awakens
the butterflies,
calling them to join
the dance
in their silent song
of praise to God.

eL

deleeme
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6 posted 2000-08-15 06:34 AM


Might I added the words,  SIMPLY SERENE (?)
             David

allan
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7 posted 2000-08-15 03:25 PM


Very very lovely this....  

Dark Angel
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8 posted 2000-08-16 02:37 AM


I agree with deleeme, "Simply Serene"

Well done Jamie!  

MMoonchild
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9 posted 2000-08-16 08:43 AM


Prometheus

nothing like a Moon-Kissed night...very nice
~~soft smiles
Maureen

Jamie
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10 posted 2000-08-17 12:10 PM


Thanks so very much. The kindness each of you have shown is what makes this such a great place.



Jamie

Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil.
"Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely".



Marge Tindal
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11 posted 2000-08-17 10:41 PM


Prometheus~


Love whispers your name
Caressing nocturnal thoughts
Holding you within


~*Marge*~


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kaile
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12 posted 2000-08-18 09:20 PM


a piece much enjoyed
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