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allan
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since 2000-04-09
Posts 620
On the road

0 posted 2000-08-13 04:28 PM


looking out to sea
the setting sun casts red dreams
clouds and waves are one


© Copyright 2000 Allan Tierney - All Rights Reserved
dgvarner
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since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552
High Springs, Florida
1 posted 2000-08-13 05:51 PM


ooh!  i love this!  very pretty picture paints...

dg

"Half of what i say is meaningless; but i say it so that the other half may reach you."
-Kahlil Gibran


dgvarner
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since 2000-05-13
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High Springs, Florida
2 posted 2000-08-13 05:58 PM


ps..have a gander at my blue sun haiku    this one reminds me of it a bit (probably a "color" thing LOL)...only, your haiku is far superior of course  

dg

"Half of what i say is meaningless; but i say it so that the other half may reach you."
-Kahlil Gibran


Yu Lan
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since 2000-04-13
Posts 1462
New Zealand
3 posted 2000-08-14 02:29 AM


Mmm... lovely Allan. ^_^ red dreams... clouds and waves are one..   I really like this!

Love,
Lynne

lotharingia
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since 2000-06-04
Posts 897
saarbruecken, Germany
4 posted 2000-08-14 09:08 AM


OOOOH, Allan!
I feel all melancholic now.
I want to go searching for the rote Blume!

  


Lotharingia
"Dreams are life, reality, creation" Miguel de Unanumo



Dennis L. White
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since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463
Michigan, U.S.A.
5 posted 2000-08-14 10:04 AM


Allan,
  Wonderful view from here, thanks for sharing!
Dennis :^)

Moonbeams radiate
When the veiling cloud has past
Playful shadows dance

Dennis L. White :^)

Jamie
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since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168
Blue Heaven
6 posted 2000-08-14 11:52 AM


Lovely Image....
allan
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since 2000-04-09
Posts 620
On the road
7 posted 2000-08-14 03:33 PM


Thanks all! I think the pub is having a special japanes week or something what?  

Uta, I hope you find these mysterious flowers...  

ellie LeJeune
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since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156
King of Prussia, PA USA
8 posted 2000-08-15 08:02 AM


Allen; You paint a glorious picture in so few words. Magnificent! Ellie

Summers haunting melody
that awakens
the butterflies,
calling them to join
the dance
in their silent song
of praise to God.

eL

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