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Dennis L. White
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since 2000-02-17
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Michigan, U.S.A.

0 posted 2000-08-13 03:08 PM


Black with a white stripe
Does not make good fashion scents
When you lift your tail!

© Copyright 2000 Dennis L. White - All Rights Reserved
ellie LeJeune
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since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156
King of Prussia, PA USA
1 posted 2000-08-13 03:11 PM


Bro; This lovely Haiku has a very bad smell,
even though it's written well! Sis

Summers haunting melody
that awakens
the butterflies,
calling them to join
the dance
in their silent song
of praise to God.

eL

deleeme
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since 1999-10-09
Posts 1766
NEW ENGLAND, USA
2 posted 2000-08-14 04:43 AM


So he dosen't have much fashion scents-
At least he make a bold statement-and the farther away(like the next state), the better!
           Very good bro!  David

Marge Tindal
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3 posted 2000-08-14 07:15 AM


Dennis~

Pheeew !  Fashion indeed !
You are a little stinker !
Scenting up the site !


~*Marge*~


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Lady Lost
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4 posted 2000-08-14 08:34 AM


I have a hard time feeling these Haikus even though Mom has explained it to me many times; this one, however, is adorable!  Reminds me of a story about when I went to pick up my black and white cat...only to find it wasnt a cat! Yuck!.....beth

You can never have too much fiction; reality can be such a bore

Jamie
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Blue Heaven
5 posted 2000-08-14 12:04 PM


Made me think of the smelly cat song on Friends!...lol
kaile
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singapore
6 posted 2000-08-18 01:49 PM


smelly cat smelly cat what are they feeding you?

dennis, i like the way you keep breaking new boundaries with your haiku attempts...NICE!

dgvarner
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since 2000-05-13
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High Springs, Florida
7 posted 2000-08-18 04:00 PM


"..smelly cat smelly cat its not your fault..."  heehee


you guys and your skunks!  gotta love that little skunk face tho dont ya!!  

very cute haiku    dg


"Half of what i say is meaningless; but i say it so that the other half may reach you."
-Kahlil Gibran


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