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Nikolette Sadness
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0 posted 2000-08-13 05:57 AM


unedited...just gonna type...and see...

~underneath the sheets~

here i lay
alone i stay
waiting for the man
by him i will stand
when we wake after this
a night with one last kiss
underneath the sheets i hide
what i really feel inside
my true self not exposed
he doesn't even know
they way i feel
is less than love
but this man
he stand above
anything i've ever had
he can't be all bad
underneath these satin sheets
covered by the dark of night
i think now i might meet
the truth we call delight

Nikolette Sadness


i was once in love and happy...but you can call me Sadness.

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Koon
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since 2000-01-27
Posts 43
Singapore
1 posted 2000-08-13 06:10 AM


Nice poem and I like it. But it's kind of sad to not know that the person you're with underneath the sheets is hiding things from you. Does it make sense? I'm really tired, and I apologize if it doesn't make any sense.

Koon-

Nikolette Sadness
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2 posted 2000-08-13 06:21 AM


it makes sense to me...

i was once in love and happy...but you can call me Sadness.

Jamie
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since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168
Blue Heaven
3 posted 2000-08-13 12:54 PM


I see someone "settling" in this



Jamie

Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil.
"Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely".



dgvarner
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since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552
High Springs, Florida
4 posted 2000-08-13 02:28 PM


yep...."settling".. dont settle.. we're worth more than that    i'm about to tell someone that btw--"i'm worth more"!  heehee

dg

"Half of what i say is meaningless; but i say it so that the other half may reach you."
-Kahlil Gibran


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