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MMoonchild
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0 posted 2000-08-12 11:59 PM





Taking That Curve

Lately I have felt a desire,
a need to improve upon my outlook on life
activities that will stimulate me
my mind, my heart, my urges.
Drive me to explore
and fill my emptiness with new visions.

I started off slowly, yesterday
With each breath of fresh air
my strength in pedaling became easier.
I kept my rhythm smooth, breathing easy,
placed the headphones above my ponytail
but below the helmet, and listened to some soothing r&b.

Every now and then the music would skip or pause...
and then continue where it left off.
Life's like that...comes to a standstill.
You need to reflect a bit
and then after the pause, you must continue on.

The journey was beautiful,
as I stopped occasionally,
letting it all sink in.
Took a few photos of the trickling waterfalls,
the wild flowers...and met Ken,
in high waders, fishing for trout (I promised I would mention him).

Never noticed the distance, like the times before.
The air was crisp and refreshing.
I was alone except for my surroundings.
I passed emus, and cattle, horses
and the most adorable family of geese.

I followed each bend, and curve in the trail...
On the way back, I stopped at the entrance
to one of the oldest railroad tunnels in America.
Not wanting to go into it's darkness, I paused
took a snapshot, entered then looking ahead
saw "the light at the end of the tunnel"
and continued on...


Maureen
2k
took a 34 mile bikeride the other day...if it wasn't for stopping to take the
pictures, and resting, I am sure they would be scraping me off the tracks by
now. *s (composite is not as clear as I had hoped...)






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Denise
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1 posted 2000-08-13 05:39 AM


Very nice, Maureen! And thanks for the reminder that it really is within our power to shape our outlook! I needed that!

Denise

Dennis L. White
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since 2000-02-17
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2 posted 2000-08-13 10:22 AM


Maureen,
  Thanks for taking us on your lovely tour, The pictures although they heightened the journey, were not essential, for your descriptions brought thier own mental pictures to mind. GOOD writing!
Dennis :^)

Moonbeams radiate
When the veiling cloud has past
Playful shadows dance

Dennis L. White :^)

Jon Mewett
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3 posted 2000-08-13 11:20 AM


A breath of fresh air Mmoonchild....this is/was a great journey thanks for the trip.

Jon

Lakewalker
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since 2000-08-05
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4 posted 2000-08-13 12:07 PM


What a wonderful break from life.  This is really a great poem, maybe I need to go out for a ride sometime...
MMoonchild
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5 posted 2000-08-14 04:11 AM


Denise
...sad thing is I haven't been able to do that since..it has been such a rainy and buggy  summer...
~~soft thanks
Maureen

MMoonchild
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6 posted 2000-08-14 10:06 AM


Dennis ...thank you for those words..they make me feel like I can get  my thoughts across

thank you John...it was a breath of fresh air..6 hours worth (I talk to everything..the  geese..the wader...the  woman whose bike had a flat and was waiting for the return of her husband)..it's a 40 mile bike path into two states...
~~smiles
Maureen

MMoonchild
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7 posted 2000-08-14 10:08 AM


Lakewalker

Sure or you can come along with me but be prepared..I talk as much as I write...
~~soft smiles
Maureen

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