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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA 
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 Kaleidoscope Dreaming I'm dreaming in a swirl of colors diamond shades of blues turning into octagons a bit of teal, green hues. I'm swimming in these waters a kaleidoscope of doubts searching, reaching, forming clouds my dreams keep swirling 'bout. I'm longing for those yellows the colors of the sun the searing orange of the heat desires, next to none. I'm seeing shades of purples their shapes a mystery blended dark, amongst my blue so hard to find, to see. I'm always wanting, yielding dreaming thoughts of you pearl-like, seeking for my "out" a colorful new view. I'll wake one day to crystal the clear of diamonds, fine etched upon them, deeply cut imprinted letters, mine. And swirled around these figures all colors, bright to see Golds to rise and reds to set my tomorrow days, shall be. ©Maureen/Moonchild 2k [This message has been edited by MMoonchild (edited 08-12-2000).] |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Simply incredible Maureen, I could just vision the colors changing in my mind. Great poem. |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
great color imagery  dg "Half of what i say is meaningless; but i say it so that the other half may reach you." -Kahlil Gibran |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
Lakewalker thank you so much Lakewalker...do you? walk the lakes...sounds nice and peaceful ~~softly thinking Maureen |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
I guess it would be more acurate to say I walk by them, not on them |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
I am either giddy from lack of sleep orrrr you are actually funny, LW ~~softly smiling Maureen *I think I knew that...lol |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
dg thank you...and I was lucky my design worked for me since I had no idea what I was doing and couldn't repeat it if I tried... ~~soft smiles M |
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Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. |
Maureen, Beautiful kaleidoscopic vision woven here in this mulit-colored tapestry poem. I love your vibriant colors! Dennis :^) |
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poutprincess Senior Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 735Perth, Western Australia, Australia |
this is wonderful....love the colours..the descriptions...another fantasic poem! ~Dawn whatcha doing in this darkness baby when you know love will set you free? will you stay in the sea forever Drowning there for all eternity? ~Live |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
Dennis thank you, I hope you can see it the way I do ..I just did a dark one and it's in a creepy font and every one I ask says its just plain fonts yet I see it in a fancy one..I don't quite understand why..I tried netscape and IE and can see it beautifully..maybe the others have to enable the font...if anyone is knowledgeable on the subject I would love to know... ~~soft smiles..Haiku One Maureen |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
Dawn thank you... well I collect kaleidoscopes and life is really a kaleidoscope also... ~~soft hugs Maureen |
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allan Senior Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 620On the road |
Beautiful, wonderful... allan  |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
allan thank you for stopping by to read and comment ~~soft smiles  Maureen |
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