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Yu Lan Senior Member
since 2000-04-13
Posts 1462New Zealand 
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Darling?! A pair of leaves snuggled close one night, As the wind blew cold and fast. Said one to the other; "Hold me tight!" Said the other; "What’s wrong dear? Tell me quick!" "Darling I’m pregnant, I think it’s a boy!" "Darling?" "Darling?!" But her poor darling was, Nowhere to be seen, As the poor chap had fallen in fright! hehehehe.. *_^ -Lynne |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
 What a fun poem I liked it, keep it up! |
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DawnG 
since 2000-06-23
Posts 1494United States |
This is a really cute poem. Dawn |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
ROFL!! this is soooo cute--i love it!! and so comically written  (is that a word?? is now!)dg "Half of what i say is meaningless; but i say it so that the other half may reach you." -Kahlil Gibran |
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Yu Lan Senior Member
since 2000-04-13
Posts 1462New Zealand |
Thank you Lakewalker! I appreciate your replies to my poems.. ^_^ And thank u Dawn.. hehe, well aah thought eet wuz kinda cute.. *_^ glad ya like it! dg, thanx.. yes, comically is a word.. I think.. at least, I use it, hehe.. so it had better be!! =P wow, thank u guys! ^^ Love, Lynne |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
More than faintly humorous Jamie Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil. "Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely". |
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Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. |
Lynne, This is a delightful poem of abandonment, I guess it was just time for Him to Leave!LOL Dennis :^) Moonbeams radiate When the veiling cloud has past Playful shadows dance Dennis L. White :^) |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
YuLan~ Such delight ! Promiscuity leaves nothing to hang on to ! You know what they say about those chaps ... gone with the first good wind ! I enjoyed your humor so much ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
Yu Lan, im real glad you posted this...really brought some cheer into my hectice monotonous life now  thanx for sharing |
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Yu Lan Senior Member
since 2000-04-13
Posts 1462New Zealand |
Thank you all!! ^_^ Jamie, Dennis, Marge and kaile.. ^_^ Oh thank you Jamie. ^_^ Dennis.. lol, yeah, he just wooden stay.. Marge, oh ha ha, very punny.. *_^ j/k.. thank you! ^^ Hey, kaile.. how come the monotony?! Love, Lynne |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Lynne- I love this! It is really cute and fun. -vicky |
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Jon Mewett Senior Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304 |
A case of leaf me alone. Jon |
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Alle'cram Senior Member
since 2000-02-28
Posts 1816Texas |
Novel idea! Very cute. Those darn leaves! Marcy |
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Tramp Poet Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 754Could Be Anywhere... |
hey YU! I resemble that! Been there done that! If i hadn't been so busy frozen in fear i would still be running! thanks for the memory ( i think) bleeding... "Tis ink coming from his arm, Captain!" |
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Yu Lan Senior Member
since 2000-04-13
Posts 1462New Zealand |
^_^ Thank Yu, much appreciated!! ^_^ Hehe.. aww, u guys are 2 kind.. Love, Lynne (grr, I always type Lynnw!!) ^_^ |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
Lynne: "Leave" it up to a man, to have a problem with commitment! Soooo funny. You've got a grear sense of humor, Lynne, I love this. Ellie |
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jamesjiao Member
since 2000-04-12
Posts 268Backwaters of Avalon |
This is insulting, not every man is like this, darling! - James The beauty of nature is displayed, not through itself, but through the creatures dwelling within its bosom. |
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Yu Lan Senior Member
since 2000-04-13
Posts 1462New Zealand |
mm.. I actually wrote this ages ago.. I think I was 13yrs.. ^_^ Ellie ~ hehe, aah, thanx. ^^ James ~ okok! =P hehe.. thanks.. -Lynne [This message has been edited by Yu Lan (edited 09-04-2000).] |
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