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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 2000-08-12 11:50 AM



In A Flash


Visions come to mind
Flashing lights across the sky
Thunder soon follows


~*Marge*~



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ellie LeJeune
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1 posted 2000-08-12 12:05 PM


Photographer there
creator taking pictures
thundering please smile

                        great job! Marge
                         love, ellie

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2 posted 2000-08-12 01:11 PM


Oh, Ellie~

Visions from your pen
What a delightful reply !
Leaves me smiling too  

~*Marge*~




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Dennis L. White
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3 posted 2000-08-12 02:42 PM


Marge,

Lightning dances free
Thunder chases with applause
On this stormy night

I love your work, err.....play. Anything this much fun can't be called work!
Dennis :^)

Moonbeams radiate
When the veiling cloud has past
Playful shadows dance

Dennis L. White :^)

Tramp Poet
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4 posted 2000-08-12 02:53 PM


hey Marge,
just had to do the other...

Companion

Rolling waves crashing
windows sing with rattle
companion to the flash

like salt and pepper, eh?
don't ya just love it?


bleeding...

"Tis ink coming
from his arm,
Captain!"


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5 posted 2000-08-12 03:58 PM


Dennis~

My dance card is full
Of sweet thunderous applause
Please turn out the lights


Daniel~

Good things come in two's
Lightning with no echoing
Missed by those who sleep


*You all are sooooo good at this ...
indeed, it cannot be called 'work'.

~*Marge*~


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Jon Mewett
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6 posted 2000-08-13 11:35 AM


Seems there's a storm a brewing...you guys are like lightning.

Jon

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7 posted 2000-08-13 12:38 PM


Jon~

Lightning does strike twice
Hear ye, the thunderous roar
Resounds on a flash !


~*Marge*~



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Jamie
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8 posted 2000-08-13 12:43 PM


the vision i see
is of your words thundering
echoes in your eyes

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9 posted 2000-08-13 12:48 PM


Prometheus~

Eyes flash with lightning
Smoldering mood is now seen
Burn with thundered green


~*Marge*~


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10 posted 2000-08-18 01:39 PM


well, i thought this was about recalling some sensational love at first sight scene and the thunder and lightning just add to the festive mood of the speaker

nice images here

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11 posted 2000-08-19 03:36 AM


Kaile~

Lightning and thunder
Not one without the other
Marriage of nature


~*Marge*~


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dgvarner
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12 posted 2000-08-19 10:25 AM


  i try to tell my 2yr old that the lightning is jesus taking pictures, so smile!  and the thunder..well, thats everyone in heaven clapping for jesus     heehee..she's not buying it yet!  lol

nice little ditty you have here!

dg


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13 posted 2000-08-19 12:03 PM


DG~

Curious children
Smiling for photographer
Thunderous applause !


~*Marge*~


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juliet_2u
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14 posted 2000-08-19 10:39 PM


Marge, my friend once again I am in awe...sigh.
Love ya,
Juls

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15 posted 2000-08-19 11:35 PM


Juliet~

In awesome wonder
The lightning speaks the thunder
We all stand amazed


~*Marge*~


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EagleOne
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16 posted 2000-08-20 03:09 AM


This is an absolute gem Marge, I'm so glad that I stoped by and discovered it.  

God grant me the serenity to accept the people I cannot change, the courage to change the one I can, and the wisdom to know it's me. ~Unknown



vlraynes
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17 posted 2000-08-20 03:14 AM



Marge-
  Sorry it took me so long to get to
  this one.  Somehow I missed it the
  first time around.  
  As is the case with all of your
  poems, I love this!  Storms...one
  of my favorite things in the world.  

  -vicky  

"...until you have read the verse on his
heart, you have not truely met the poet.
  -vlraynes

Lakewalker
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18 posted 2000-08-20 07:25 PM


Marge, this is so great!  You've captured the moment so well.  Thanks for sharing
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