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dgvarner
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0 posted 2000-08-11 10:43 PM



Anxious dreams released
Kisses wet and longing are
Passion shivers deep

-dgvarner


"Half of what i say is meaningless; but i say it so that the other half may reach you."
-Kahlil Gibran


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ellie LeJeune
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1 posted 2000-08-12 02:30 AM


OOOO, so romantic! Sigh, lovely....ellie
Little_Spyro
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2 posted 2000-08-12 04:44 AM


Well, now!
If only my girlfriend and I could be this romantic...of course, she's 15 and I'm 14, so I think we're a little young for that...

Great job, dg!!  

Little Spyro T. Dragon


Watching the poets
Passions' guardian dragon
Moves with the rhymes' flow.

dgvarner
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3 posted 2000-08-12 07:47 AM


thanks ELLIE     just a little ditty brought on to show-up parker LOL (see "softly"!)

YES SPYRO---YOURE TOO YOUNG FOR THAT!!  lol..thanks for reading!  

dg

"Half of what i say is meaningless; but i say it so that the other half may reach you."
-Kahlil Gibran


Dennis L. White
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4 posted 2000-08-12 10:20 AM


DgV,

Passions full release
Unbridled souls intertwined
Achieve ecstasy

WOW! This is Hot, DgV!
Dennis :^)

dgvarner
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5 posted 2000-08-12 12:14 PM


WOWSERS DENNIS!! now how am i supposed to top that one??  wee-doggies!!  

dg

"Half of what i say is meaningless; but i say it so that the other half may reach you."
-Kahlil Gibran


vlraynes
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6 posted 2000-08-12 06:18 PM



dg-
  this is GREAT!  Love it!!  

  love ya,
       tricks

"...until you have read the verse on his
heart, you have not truely met the poet.
                  -vlraynes

Yu Lan
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since 2000-04-13
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7 posted 2000-08-12 09:38 PM


hehe.. and so begins the competition for the HOTTEST kiss poem.. *_^ hehe.. contrast to softly!! ^_^ phew..

u r really good at these, dg! ^_^

-Lynne

dgvarner
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8 posted 2000-08-12 11:44 PM


tricks and yu lan:  thanks for your comments--we're just havin too much fun!   join in!!

dg

"Half of what i say is meaningless; but i say it so that the other half may reach you."
-Kahlil Gibran


Parker
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9 posted 2000-09-16 03:17 AM


Been away too long seem to have missed all the action...

Passions Flavor

Drink of loves wet kiss
When gates of passion run deep
To taste the sweetness

Where lips and skin meet
Aromas of raging need
Satisfy the want

Deep is deep the need
You the feast of flavored dreams
On my passions plate.


Just for you dg... hope you like.

Parker





dgvarner
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10 posted 2000-09-16 09:53 AM


woohoo!!  shiver is me....
hey, somebody pass the ice, its gettin warm in here!!

thanks parker..i love it    dont think i can top it..you win  LOL  

"i'm growin'/ i dont like it/ i'm growin' and it hurts/ i love you/ but i'm tired/ i guess i've got a lot to learn..." -w. watson

Parker
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11 posted 2000-09-16 11:49 AM


dg, oh but do try.... top it please.  

err..... what do I win?  you for diner!    

Parker

Marsha
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12 posted 2000-09-17 02:32 PM


Dee, how did this one slip past me? Were you hiding it until I was asleep, I thought so! This is a perfect example of what i was saying, what you say in a word, takes me pages of tedious hard slog. You know I love this as always, but then you never write anything less than perfection. Bouquets and bravos for this love. Take care love, your own personnal applause section.
Bubbles

Sven
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13 posted 2000-09-17 03:38 PM


Come on dg. . . I know that you can do better than Parker. . . LOL  

Parker. . . I can't turn my back on you for a minute can I??  

Excellent job by both of you. . .

------------------------------------------------------

That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


dgvarner
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14 posted 2000-09-18 12:20 PM


parker..i like your idea of prizes    dinner would be nice...!  i'll try to top ya..workin on it..stick with me..

bubbles..thank parker for bringing this little ditty back up    thank you again for the kind of reply that makes a person blush!

sven..ok ok..i'm workin on a topper!     thanks for stoppin by  

hugs, dg

"i'm growin'/ i dont like it/ i'm growin' and it hurts/ i love you/ but i'm tired/ i guess i've got a lot to learn..." -w. watson

Parker
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15 posted 2000-09-18 01:02 AM


dg, I didn't really mean to try and beat mine, because I think your's is the gem sweets. Ah... you could win me... just answer the skill testing question.... its a ten digit number what is it ...  

and Sven.... what for are you talking about?

Parker

dgvarner
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16 posted 2000-09-18 01:03 AM


well boys..this is fantastic considering i feel completely not-this tonite.....!  hope you like it     dg


claws of velvet hand
piercing flesh through passion's sweat
echo hearts afire

blissfully i need
desires flow like cool water
quench my living thirst

ravish melding souls
ecstasy's rolling thunder
wrinkle heaven's bed

-dgvarner
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"i'm growin'/ i dont like it/ i'm growin' and it hurts/ i love you/ but i'm tired/ i guess i've got a lot to learn..." -w. watson


[This message has been edited by dgvarner (edited 09-18-2000).]

Irie
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17 posted 2000-09-18 01:09 AM


WOW....These are great dg. ALL of them....
I'm really starting to like these.....  


~Sheri

dgvarner
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18 posted 2000-09-18 01:16 AM


PARKER..what?  skill testing?? ten digit #??  
1234567890  how bout that?  

hugs, dg


"i'm growin'/ i dont like it/ i'm growin' and it hurts/ i love you/ but i'm tired/ i guess i've got a lot to learn..." -w. watson

dgvarner
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19 posted 2000-09-18 01:17 AM


sheri..thank you!  and i'm sure dennis and parker would thank you too  



"i'm growin'/ i dont like it/ i'm growin' and it hurts/ i love you/ but i'm tired/ i guess i've got a lot to learn..." -w. watson

Parker
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20 posted 2000-09-18 06:23 PM


dg, I think that would be your phone number...  
dgvarner
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21 posted 2000-09-18 11:01 PM


oh....ROFL!!  
sorry PARKER!  couldnt figure that one out..been out of the dating scene too long i guess !! LOL......
so you liked my little ditty? or what?  

hugs, dg

"i'm growin'/ i dont like it/ i'm growin' and it hurts/ i love you/ but i'm tired/ i guess i've got a lot to learn..." -w. watson

Parker
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22 posted 2000-09-19 12:27 PM


Oh, I liked it very much, I submit you win... I think my brow is starting to sweat...
    

Parker

[This message has been edited by Haleyja (edited 09-19-2000).]

dgvarner
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23 posted 2000-09-19 04:13 PM


what?  just like that i win?  aw that was too easy...    thanks for playin PARKER

hugs, dg

"i'm growin'/ i dont like it/ i'm growin' and it hurts/ i love you/ but i'm tired/ i guess i've got a lot to learn..." -w. watson

a_little_girl
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24 posted 2000-09-19 05:15 PM


Awe...how romantic, dg. Spyro, we could be that romantic...but going beyond that...well...
--Little Girl

Parker
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25 posted 2000-09-19 06:44 PM


How about something more challenging like twister....  

Parker

dgvarner
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26 posted 2000-09-19 07:37 PM


little girl... ?i'm not sure how to respond to your reply!..but thank you for reading..  

parker...twister sounds fun!...how bout it..  

hugs, dg

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"i'm growin'/ i dont like it/ i'm growin' and it hurts/ i love you/ but i'm tired/ i guess i've got a lot to learn..." -w. watson


[This message has been edited by dgvarner (edited 09-19-2000).]

blackhalo
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27 posted 2000-09-20 12:25 PM


wow!  absolutely amazing, y'all!  Desire is life's passion.  If only my boyfriend could be this romantic!  He's a poet, but I can't seem to get him to post anything here!  Maybe y'all can help me convince him!  LOL!
Alicia A. Renzelman

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