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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
come to me softly < !signature-->fervent whispers on your breath touch me with your heart -dgvarner "Half of what i say is meaningless; but i say it so that the other half may reach you." -Kahlil Gibran [This message has been edited by dgvarner (edited 08-11-2000).] |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Lips in quivers rush Touch upon touch in sweet kiss Fulfilling your heart Parker |
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Little_Spyro Senior Member
since 2000-01-09
Posts 659San Diego, CA, USA |
Beautiful piece here Much like the inner depths of The poet's true soul. Incredible piece Senryu worth treasuring For the rest of time. Little Spyro T. Dragon Watching the poets Passions' guardian dragon Moves with the rhymes' flow. |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
dgvarner, moi think you write good senyrus yet you seldom post them here....pls do post more for our pleasure |
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BSC
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Member Elite
since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
dg - So few words, so much tenderness. Wonderful. Bonnie |
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Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. |
GgV, Sweet whispers beckon Hearts open invitation Rapture soon to come Beautiful senual senryu! Dennis :^) Moonbeams radiate When the veiling cloud has past Playful shadows dance Dennis L. White :^) |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
woohoo! chilly willy(aka parker!), ya killin me!! you live where? run baby run..meet me HERE!! LOL Ltl spyro: you know i love to hear from you, you master poet! thanks for the poetic response kaile: aw..youre too kind actually i post them when i write them, i mean theyre so short after all..why not aye! bonnie: thank you thank you!...*bowing in secret pleasure at such a kind response* woohoo dennis!! i'm liking that one too!! you guys are the ones that are so good at this!! love the poetic responses dg "Half of what i say is meaningless; but i say it so that the other half may reach you." -Kahlil Gibran |
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Jon Mewett Senior Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304 |
A moment captured...lovely. Jon |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
A Kiss Thunder in the mind madness engulfs the body wanton lips shall meet. |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
thank you JON! good one PARKER! thunder? madness? sounds good to me... lol dg "Half of what i say is meaningless; but i say it so that the other half may reach you." -Kahlil Gibran |
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