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Darkened Treasures
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since 2000-07-19
Posts 18
nj

0 posted 2000-08-10 10:19 PM


The sprout of life breaks through the ground
Rising each day  above a world so profound.
Reaching further, yearning for height
Feeling the breeze of Love's delight.

Summertime brings about a more solidified form
And with it confidence to appease the forlorn
Desire for more, to tempting to resist
New goals are to be added to the list

Fall arrives with all its grand colorful splendor
The offer of continuence is granted by the lender
Delving deeper into the cycle of life
The next stage obtained sans strife

Winter delivers the magic of a bonding spell
Two will become one, as the hearts are held
And the closing, tis not of an end
Rather a new birth, a beginning again



Who would have thought a good little girl like you could destroy my beautiful wickedness.

© Copyright 2000 Mark - All Rights Reserved
Denise
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1 posted 2000-08-10 10:27 PM


Very very nice! Welcome to Passions too!  

Denise

Lakewalker
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since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289
On the streets w/ people
2 posted 2000-08-10 10:42 PM


Great poem, I can't wait to read more!
dgvarner
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since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552
High Springs, Florida
3 posted 2000-08-10 11:03 PM


"Winter delivers the magic of a bonding spell
Two will become one, as the hearts are held
And the closing, tis not of an end
Rather a new birth, a beginning again"

very nice writing     welcome!!  
dg

"Half of what i say is meaningless; but i say it so that the other half may reach you."
-Kahlil Gibran


Marge Tindal
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since 1999-11-06
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Florida's Foreverly Shores
4 posted 2000-08-11 08:08 AM


DarkenedTreasures~
Welcome to the friendship circle
of Passionate Poets ...
You've sprinkled some lovely thoughts upon the page ...
Hope to see more.
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Lady Lost
Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 470

5 posted 2000-08-11 09:09 AM


WOW!  This is a beautiful poem..I was lost in its magic..What can I say? You have a talent that you kept hidden..or maybe just hidden from me.  Summer is my favorite...so many marvalous nights for moondancing....Love, Beth

You can never have too much fiction; reality can be such a bore

ellie LeJeune
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since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156
King of Prussia, PA USA
6 posted 2000-08-12 02:39 AM


This is so lovely. Beautifully romantic and flowing.  ellie

Summers haunting melody
that awakens
the butterflies,
calling them to join
the dance
in their silent song
of praise to God.

eL

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