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Dennis L. White
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since 2000-02-17
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0 posted 2000-08-10 06:42 AM


You run, oh so fast
Such eloquent mighty strides
Can you change your spots?

© Copyright 2000 Dennis L. White - All Rights Reserved
Jon Mewett
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1 posted 2000-08-10 06:53 AM


Dennis these Haiku's seem to trip off your pen with eloquent ease.......I think I will nominate you the Haiku king.

I am sire

Jon

BSC
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2 posted 2000-08-10 08:16 AM


I will second Jon's motion Dennis....You are amazing!!!  Bonnie
Alle'cram
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3 posted 2000-08-10 12:18 PM


...and you got a third! Just great.  marcy
ellie LeJeune
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4 posted 2000-08-10 06:00 PM


I too, bow down to the King...Sis
Lakewalker
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5 posted 2000-08-10 06:22 PM


I agree, your words come off as so natural and beautiful, you are fit to be the king
Jamie
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6 posted 2000-08-10 08:00 PM


Words fit for a king
issue from the pen of one
making for a feast

great work denniss



Jamie

Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil.
"Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely".



dgvarner
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7 posted 2000-08-10 11:08 PM


what--they didnt know you were already dubbed the "haiku king"??  LOL  

another mighty masterpiece written in such few words..  


dg

"Half of what i say is meaningless; but i say it so that the other half may reach you."
-Kahlil Gibran


kaile
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8 posted 2000-08-11 06:00 AM


well, dennis, you probably know that i treat you as the haiku king anyway....

i like this title muchly and i dig the humour here

Dennis L. White
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since 2000-02-17
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Michigan, U.S.A.
9 posted 2000-08-11 06:55 AM


Thank you ALL for your kind consideration and words, My brother David has dubbed me the "Haiku Yahoo", but I prefer to think of myself as the "Haiku Clown"! Thanks again!
Dennis :^)
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Moonbeams radiate
When the veiling cloud has past
Playful shadows dance

Dennis L. White :^)


[This message has been edited by Dennis L. White (edited 08-11-2000).]

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