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Majestic
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0 posted 2000-08-09 11:09 PM



White flakes falling down
Making cold winter blanket
Children make angels

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"To live is to love; To truly LOVE is to live!" ~kg~




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dgvarner
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1 posted 2000-08-09 11:14 PM


love the picture this brought to mind!  arent snow angels fun.....  

dg

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Jamie
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2 posted 2000-08-09 11:22 PM


I love it,I love it, I love it!
But, hey! I make them too....lol



Jamie

Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil.
"Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely".



Dennis L. White
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3 posted 2000-08-10 06:28 AM


Majestic,
  Middle of August is too early to think about SNOW! LOL Love this haiku, WRITE ON!
Dennis :^)

Moonbeams radiate
When the veiling cloud has past
Playful shadows dance

Dennis L. White :^)

BSC
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4 posted 2000-08-10 07:47 AM


Hot August day....Love the thought of snow... especially love to make those snow angels.  Second childhood I guess.  Great job.  Bonnie
ellie LeJeune
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5 posted 2000-08-10 06:03 PM


Majestic; This sooo "cool"!  ellie

Summers haunting melody
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the butterflies,
calling them to join
the dance
in their silent song
of praise to God.

eL

Lakewalker
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6 posted 2000-08-10 06:16 PM


I love snow and this really made me think of all the great winters.  Wondeful piece of writing!  

Dennis, it's never to early to think about snow!  It's a wonderful thing.

kaile
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7 posted 2000-08-11 05:38 AM


with a title like that, who could go wrong?..wonderful piece of work here
Alle'cram
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8 posted 2000-08-12 10:38 AM


majestic,  great job, especially for a "first"?  enjoyed much.  marcy  
Marge Tindal
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9 posted 2000-08-12 10:59 AM


Majestic~

August heat of day
Frolic among snow angels
Ah, so refreshing !


~*Marge*~


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