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ellie LeJeune
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since 2000-01-10

Posts 4156
King of Prussia, PA USA

0 posted 2000-08-08 05:40 PM

Plucked out of the ground
Airborn to the nearest tree
Is it dinner, Mom?

[This message has been edited by ellie LeJeune (edited 08-08-2000).]

Jamie
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since 2000-06-26

Posts 3168
Blue Heaven

1 posted 2000-08-08 06:21 PM

A norman rockwell moment!!!!
but uh......( i think plucked is one syllable)

Jamie

Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil.
"Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely".

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

2 posted 2000-08-09 12:22 PM

Ellie~

Robin feeds her young
Ewwwwww ! A nasty little worm
Fledglings sing - Yum ! Yum !

~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Dennis L. White
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since 2000-02-17

Posts 1463
Michigan, U.S.A.

3 posted 2000-08-09 11:39 AM

Ellie,
This haiku has a worm cozy feeling to it! This could be one of your nest!
Dennis :^)

Moonbeams radiate
When the veiling cloud has past
Playful shadows dance

Dennis L. White :^)

dgvarner
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since 2000-05-13

Posts 3552
High Springs, Florida

4 posted 2000-08-09 02:46 PM

love this little picture youve painted!

dg

"Half of what i say is meaningless; but i say it so that the other half may reach you."
-Kahlil Gibran

allan
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since 2000-04-09

Posts 620
On the road

5 posted 2000-08-09 03:38 PM

'Made me smile. thanks. 'get a nice warm autumnal feel from this one somehow. lovely...

BSC

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since 2000-02-04

Posts 2919
New York, USA

6 posted 2000-08-09 03:59 PM

LOL "Is it dinner, Mom?" Gotta love this one Ellie. Bonnie

Lakewalker
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since 2000-08-05

Posts 3289
On the streets w/ people

7 posted 2000-08-10 12:45 PM

What a fun haihu, it's great

Keep up the awesome work.

chibi_dragon
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since 2000-07-04

Posts 58

8 posted 2000-08-10 12:54 PM

Nice modern haiku. It does describe what most of our meals seem to be these days...

--Chibi

Elizabeth

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since 1999-06-07

Posts 6871
Minnesota

9 posted 2000-08-10 02:21 PM

So cute!

Elizabeth

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