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ellie LeJeune
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since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156
King of Prussia, PA USA

0 posted 2000-08-08 03:56 AM


A jacket does wear
of yellow and black so fare
of his touch beware!

© Copyright 2000 ellie LeJeune - All Rights Reserved
Jamie
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since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168
Blue Heaven
1 posted 2000-08-08 04:59 AM


This is so wonderful I will overlook the rhymes...lol

Keep on Haikuing!!!



Jamie

Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil.
"Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely".



Dennis L. White
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since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463
Michigan, U.S.A.
2 posted 2000-08-08 06:51 AM


Ellie,
  There is a buzz in the Pub, that you are now writing Haikus and they are so Grand!  I'll wasp out for them! Write on Sis!
Dennis :^)

Moonbeams radiate
When the veiling cloud has past
Playful shadows dance

Dennis L. White :^)

allan
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since 2000-04-09
Posts 620
On the road
3 posted 2000-08-08 02:16 PM


Hmmm enigmatic! I like it  

deleeme
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since 1999-10-09
Posts 1766
NEW ENGLAND, USA
4 posted 2000-08-08 10:39 PM


Here is one all dressed
For his mission, he has zest
To keep us distressed!

Yes, Dear Ellie- you have been hooked & I'm liking how your Haikus look! And I don't mind, rhyme is fine!     David


[This message has been edited by deleeme (edited 08-08-2000).]

dgvarner
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since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552
High Springs, Florida
5 posted 2000-08-11 12:27 PM


buzzzzzzzzzz     cute one eL!

dg

"Half of what i say is meaningless; but i say it so that the other half may reach you."
-Kahlil Gibran


kaile
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since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146
singapore
6 posted 2000-08-11 05:31 AM


ellie, how nice is it to come back here and watch you attempting a poetic form close to my heart!!..do keep up the good work
Lakewalker
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since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289
On the streets w/ people
7 posted 2000-08-11 10:05 AM


Awesome!  Great work
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