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MaryArlet
Junior Member
since 2000-08-07
Posts 15
Phoenix, Arizona, USA

0 posted 2000-08-08 01:34 AM


Hanging up, the words echoed inside my head
"She's asleep, do you understand?
She's gone - your mother is dead."
I tried to find courage to fight the pain,
as outside it grew quiet and started to rain...


Standing in the doorway, looking at you,
hit by reality, I realized your life was through.
Never again would I my feelings bare,
or hear you tell me how much you care.
No more of your love and warmth would I feel
now came the pain, this hurt will never heal.
One by one the tears stained my face,
as I thought of you being in a better place.
Leaning over, I can't hold back and start to cry,
as I kiss your cheek and whisper softly,
I love you dear momma,
goodbye.

© Copyright 2000 Mary Arlet - All Rights Reserved
ellie LeJeune
Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156
King of Prussia, PA USA
1 posted 2000-08-08 04:10 AM


Dear Mary: I can feel your loss and pain. I too have lost my mother and there are no comforting words I can say, except that I understand. writing about her helps. ellie

Summers haunting melody
that awakens
the butterflies,
calling them to join
the dance
in their silent song
of praise to God.

eL

Lady Lost
Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 470

2 posted 2000-08-08 09:43 AM


Mary I am so sorry for your loss.  I can't imagine losing my mother..god bless you....beth

You can never have too much fiction; reality can be such a bore

Jon Mewett
Senior Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304

3 posted 2000-08-08 12:08 PM


Your words tell how special you thought your mum was Mary.

She will be so happy at that.

Jon

MaryArlet
Junior Member
since 2000-08-07
Posts 15
Phoenix, Arizona, USA
4 posted 2000-08-08 10:09 PM


Thanks so much!! My mom passed away 15 years ago, and it still seems like yesterday. She was very special to me, she was my best friend. It was very hard for me to post this last night, as it had just started raining when I got to the Corner Pub... brought back some sad memories. It helps to be able to share them. Thank you!


dgvarner
Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552
High Springs, Florida
5 posted 2000-08-09 12:46 PM


mary..very deep sadness i feel in this...i lost my dad when i was sixteen..i know that feeling of how it seems like it happened just yesterday...

good writing  

dg

"Half of what i say is meaningless; but i say it so that the other half may reach you."
-Kahlil Gibran


vlraynes
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...
6 posted 2000-08-09 01:07 AM



Mary,
   you know i feel this right along with you
   when i read it.  love it.  

   love ya,
      vicky

"I have read your words, and within them I
have found your heart.  
                    -vlraynes

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