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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven 
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Laughing Spider On a single thread a spider sways in the wind unheard laughter seen Jamie Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil. "Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely". |
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Majestic Member
since 2000-01-11
Posts 264houston, tx. |
wow...i could actually picture that spider laughing...good job.. "To live is to love; To truly LOVE is to live!" ~kg~ |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Excellent Haiku Master!  |
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MaryArlet Junior Member
since 2000-08-07
Posts 15Phoenix, Arizona, USA |
That is fantastic!! Thanks for sharing that with us, and I look forward to reading more of your work!! |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
awesome haiku jamie! i love that the spider is laughing!! dg "Half of what i say is meaningless; but i say it so that the other half may reach you." -Kahlil Gibran |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Jamie- Gotta love those laughing spiders. Great job!! Welcome to the pub.  -vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet. -vlraynes |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Oh Excellent Jamie!! Absolutley! |
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Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. |
Prometheus, A delightful Haiku, though it is kind of chilling thinking of a laughing spider! Well done! Dennis :^) Moonbeams radiate When the veiling cloud has past Playful shadows dance Dennis L. White :^) |
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Jon Mewett Senior Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304 |
Nice one...but hey Dennis I've never seen a sad spider either Jon |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Spiderman, Spiderman From the friendly Neighbourhood Ever Smiling Spiderman ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha  well which of the above is a haiku? ........ Hey Jamie, Teach me will you? how to write one... You write such wonderfully well that I am afraid I will never learn to be on equal terms... in haiku poetry... but then what cares equality? regards to a wonderful poet... Sudhir |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Prometheus~ Spider merrily Swinging from vine in the tree No Tarzan is he ! Arachnophobic Breeze from can of RAID ensues Spider must know fate For the life of me I honestly cannot see Dead spider, laughing ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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BSC
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Member Elite
since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
Wow, I got goosebumps reading this one, I am petrified of those 8 legged little creatures, and if reading this gave me the willies....it must be great. Bonnie |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
My apologies to one and all for neglecting to thank each of you for the wonderful and kind replies.....I saw a spider swinging in the wind and thought, people would have such great fun with that....so why not the spider? Jamie Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil. "Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely". |
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Majestic Member
since 2000-01-11
Posts 264houston, tx. |
Excuse me Prometheus...But have to say to Marge on the last haiku: (For the life of me I honestly cannot see Dead spider, laughing !) ROTFLMAO!!! Hilarious Marge. |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
a nice piece of tranquility here....and welcome to the pub!!  |
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Yu Lan Senior Member
since 2000-04-13
Posts 1462New Zealand |
prometheus! I love this! hehe, what a cheerful spider.. laughter in the wind.. *_^ Welcome 2 the pub.. hehe Love, Lynne |
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