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allan
Senior Member

since 2000-04-09

Posts 620
On the road

0 posted 2000-08-07 01:51 PM

the night bombers sought targets in my head
fiery waves of leaves of autumn outside
in my mind was a still stream
running in rich green grasses
glinting like victorian bottles
tumbling small stones far away into the night
lost roads every inch a home for countless beasts
herds of life everywhere bleating braying longing
for escape
and I dangle a thought wet and blackest purple
deep down inside my head
the sun splitting the trees in shafts of gold
we stretching legs weary with waiting
foraging among freckled leaves
we grow deep in the earth rough stones
of childhood
grey heads nodding down on the infants
lost in thought drifting on white winds
red rosy and dreaming always gliding away
from the day
taking the dream way home

lotharingia
Senior Member

since 2000-06-04

Posts 897
saarbruecken, Germany

1 posted 2000-08-09 02:09 PM

allan,

I take it you are currently inspired?! This was, well, a dream!

Lotharingia
"Dreams are life, reality, creation" Miguel de Unanumo

dgvarner
Member Elite

since 2000-05-13

Posts 3552
High Springs, Florida

2 posted 2000-08-09 02:23 PM

"freckled leaves"...

"we grow deep in the earth rough stones
of childhood..."

allan..you have such a wonderful way with words..your work is like a good movie--you have to see it a couple of times to make sure you didnt miss anything..something new each time

this is awesome..as usual!

dg

"Half of what i say is meaningless; but i say it so that the other half may reach you."
-Kahlil Gibran

allan
Senior Member

since 2000-04-09

Posts 620
On the road

3 posted 2000-08-09 03:30 PM

Aw.. thanks you two.. I didn't really think this one worked too well. Too many non-sequetours (how DO you spell that..) and such-like... 'Glad you liked it anyhow!

BSC

Moderator

Member Elite

since 2000-02-04

Posts 2919
New York, USA

4 posted 2000-08-09 04:02 PM

Allan - Oh, I think this worked VERY well!...What precious, beautiful images it evokes. Love it. Bonnie

Jamie
Member Elite

since 2000-06-26

Posts 3168
Blue Heaven

5 posted 2000-08-09 11:00 PM

sometimes poetry rattles a bit,, but this one still evokes great images

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