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dreamer1775
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since 2000-05-05
Posts 20
florida

0 posted 2000-08-06 08:10 PM


I laid in bed today,
after you kissed me good bye.
tears streamed down my face,
as i could still smell you on my skin,
my hair,
could still taste you on my mouth.

I laid in bed today,
after i watched you drive away,
i did start to cry,
my hands covered my face,
as the sun streamed through my fingers.
warming my tears and my face.

I laid in bed today,
as you left today.
i did cry as i thought of days,
without holding you.
of nights without laying in your arms.

I whisper to you,
softly as the wind can carry it.
Good Bye My Love,
till i can kiss your mouth,
i will always be with you,
in your heart,
in the memories we shared,
so Good Bye My Love,
till i see you again.




kayte
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DawnG
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since 2000-06-23
Posts 1494
United States
1 posted 2000-08-06 10:08 PM


This describes perfectly my feelings when my ex boyfriend left to return home. We were a couple who met online and that parting after he came to see me was really hard and painful..

                          Dawn

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