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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA 
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Mourning song they sing Symbols of lovers sweet bliss heavens marriage made |
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Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. |
Ellie, A picture of Love Birds comes to mind! How sweet a scene you paint here! COO-COO! Dennis :^) [This message has been edited by Dennis L. White (edited 08-06-2000).] |
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deleeme Senior Member
since 1999-10-09
Posts 1766NEW ENGLAND, USA |
Ellie writes of love In her very first haiku-- Lovely as a Dove! Ellie, I was wondering when you were going to join us in the Haiku craze. I knew you could do it--you're of to a lovely start!(Wasn't it fun!!!) David |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
ellie- this is teriffic! welcome to haiku anonymous.  they really are addicting. lovely wings in flight soaring joyous high above heaven's honeymoon -vlraynes "I have read your words, and within them I have found your heart. -vlraynes [This message has been edited by vlraynes (edited 08-06-2000).] |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
Ellie a lovely hiaku. "To the centre of the city where all roads meet, waiting for you,To the depths of the ocean where all hopes sank, searching for you," Joy divison |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Oh Ellie, this is just beautiful. What a peaceful and loving image this creates! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Beautiful, Ellie! Denise |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Ellie~ Peaceful dove of song Sung so sweetly on this day I do - if you do ~*Marge*~ Loved your inspirational piece. ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Alle'cram Senior Member
since 2000-02-28
Posts 1816Texas |
Your just too good and having soo much fun! At the break of dawn Ellie sings us a love song Sounds so magical |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
ellie,i am puzzled over this one:how can a mourning song be considered as sweet bliss?will you mind enlightening this poetry frog-in-well? |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
so sweet adictted how will I ever go back to normal poems. What I write and others read is your own experiance and perceptions. |
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