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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... 
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for all my new (and old) poetic friends. thanks for all the good times.  __________________________ on-line addiction new friends frequent corner pub drunk on word and rhyme -vlraynes "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes So, people; I've seen two different spellings for this type of poetry. Help me out here. Is it senyru or senryu. Thanks for the help. [This message has been edited by vlraynes (edited 08-06-2000).] |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
heehee! addiction it is! "drunk on word and rhyme"  cheers! dg "Half of what i say is meaningless; but i say it so that the other half may reach you." -Kahlil Gibran |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Vicky~ What a special treat ! Intoxicating, indeed ! Look ! A Senryu !  ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
dg- me...addicted....nah. thanks for reading. glad you liked it. cheers back at ya. -tricks "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet. -vlraynes |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Marge- hi, new friend! thanks for thekind words. so, have i been spelling senyru/senryu wrong all this time? i'm sooooooo confused. -vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet. -vlraynes [This message has been edited by vlraynes (edited 08-06-2000).] |
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Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. |
VL, Senryu: a Japanese form of seventeen syllables in three lines. Unlike the haiku, a senryu doesn't have to refer to a season. There are five syllables on the first line, seven syllables on the second line, and five syllables on the last line. I hope this helps, I enjoy your poem!KEEP WRITING! Dennis :^) Moonbeams radiate When the veiling cloud has past Playful shadows dance Dennis L. White :^) |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Dennis- thanks for the haiku/senryu lesson. thanks, too, for reading and for all your encouraging words. they really mean alot. now, i'll go edit the title of this to the correct spelling.  -vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet. -vlraynes [This message has been edited by vlraynes (edited 08-06-2000).] |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
a lovely truthful representation of the pub!...Cheers!! |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
"on-line addiction" It seems everything on-line can be addicting, but none as much as the visits to The Corner Pub Wonderful Senryu |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
kaile- Thanks so much for reading. I appreciate your kind response. Glad you liked this. Lakewalker- so true...just can't seem to get enough. Thanks for reading, andfor the kind words. -vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet. -vlraynes |
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