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Tramp Poet Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 754Could Be Anywhere... 
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Definition the kiss lingers soft, warm, lovely breath sweet and inviting. the scent of love mixed with hair and neck happiness defined. the smile crashes barriers and cares tumbling down into pieces. the world narrows attention focused only love is important. the feel of skin touch awakening emotional fingertips. the love erupts bubbling forth like wine bursting with contentment. the kiss lingers once more, softly damp skin cooling. the scents of love fill our senses happiness defined. bleeding... "Tis ink coming from his arm, Captain!" |
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PhaerieChild Senior Member
since 1999-08-30
Posts 1787Aloha, Oregon |
Happiness defined indeed! This is so beautifully romantic. I love tender moments like this. Love ya... Sis Poetry~ Words falling on paper, painting a dream. Shawna R. Holder Boise, Idaho |
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Alle'cram Senior Member
since 2000-02-28
Posts 1816Texas |
Hi Dan, Sounds like happiness to me! I love how you set the scene for this romatic piece. Great job. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Daniel~ What a lovely piece to ponder. 'the feel of skin touch awakening emotional fingertips' Nothing as sensually felt as the exploration of 'emotional fingertips' Oh, I like this !  ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Tramp Poet Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 754Could Be Anywhere... |
Thanks so much for the imput, ladies! Shawna-yes tis a special momnet for sure thanks Marcy...a bit racy but the "marriage bed" and all that Marge- thank you! yes nothing quite like older, mature naturally slowing true love. (unless it's kid-fire, no sleep or food, let's never stop...or maybe anywhere in between?). lol thanks for the comments! Are the personal libraries no longer functional? bleeding... "Tis ink coming from his arm, Captain!" |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Beautifully romantic, Daniel! Denise |
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Tramp Poet Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 754Could Be Anywhere... |
thanks Denise... one of those that's a delight to write... welcome change from all the gloom that's been haughting me... appreciate the imput! seems like i am, bleeding... "Tis ink coming from his arm, Captain!" |
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chibi_dragon Member
since 2000-07-04
Posts 58 |
Breath takingly astounding, bleeding. You've outdone yourself this time!! --Chibi |
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chibi_dragon Member
since 2000-07-04
Posts 58 |
Breath takingly astounding, bleeding. You've outdone yourself this time!! --Chibi |
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BSC
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Member Elite
since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
Ahhhh, happiness defined.....indeed! This is so utterly romantic, love it. Bonnie |
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Yu Lan Senior Member
since 2000-04-13
Posts 1462New Zealand |
mm, this is so beautiful Dan.. perfect description.. u know, I REALLY like your style of writing, hehe.. ^_^ Well done again Daniel.. Luv, Lynne |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Wonderful. . . the world is full of little love stories. . . thanks for sharing this one. . . -------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
I really like this poem. There is the feel of a deep love here that is always the best! ellie Summers haunting melody that awakens the butterflies, calling them to join the dance in their silent song of praise to God. eL |
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Tramp Poet Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 754Could Be Anywhere... |
chibi-{blushing} thank you for the imput! double dippin, eh? Bonnie-lol yes candlelight and all that! YuLan- REALLY? REALLY, REALLY?? thanks, sis Sven-thank you for the read, sir! ellie- yeppers found that without love it's just excercise (yuck-a-roo)! bleeding... "Tis ink coming from his arm, Captain!" |
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