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Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. 
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Moon dictates your path You alternate high and low With your ebb and flow |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very good, Dennis! Denise |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
These little things are hard to write!! This is good... |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
Masterfully done! The tides of time and described so well. It's a wonder we use so many words, when here is proof that it only takes a few to say it all! Love, Sis Summers haunting melody that awakens the butterflies, calling them to join the dance in their silent song of praise to God. eL |
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deleeme Senior Member
since 1999-10-09
Posts 1766NEW ENGLAND, USA |
You make us loonie- You're another"all-nighter" Who sleeps in the day! Just thought I would throw that in! Great job, Dennis, your Bro, David |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Dennis- This is beautiful. Really love it.  You always say so much in your few words. Thanks for sharing this. -vicky "I have read your words, and within them I have found your heart. -vlraynes |
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Alle'cram Senior Member
since 2000-02-28
Posts 1816Texas |
You are so good with these!(The moon is making me do it ).Clouds covers the moon Gravitation's off! Now, to ebb or flow? |
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